Official Move Approval III

[Albert Wesker]

Ballad
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Blast From the Past (requires Telepathy, requires Ranged Proficiency, requires Debuff Proficiency.) (600 OM)

Arguably one of Ballad's most powerful moves in his arsenal. During combat, Ballad will force himself to lower his defenses to a sizable degree, leaving him vulnerable to attack so he can concentrate. During this time, he is staring at his opponent, his eyes slowly turning white during the process. Eventually, after around seven seconds passed, he blinks, then proceeds to say something related to their past, catching the opponent off guard and allowing Ballad to counter attack.

The pros of the move is that, if successful, the move can cause the person it is used against to possibly feel shocked and uncertain, hurting their ability to fight significantly. It also applies a "image assault" ability, where any time Ballad ends up mentioning the memory in question, it flashes in the person's mind, which further distracts them and gives Ballad a bigger advantage. This, however, only lasts for around thirty seconds, and the effect stops working after those thirty seconds have passed.

The cons, however, severely outweigh the pros. For starters, he is heavily vulnerable during the seven second process, which can severely injure him if not used properly. Also, Primes with a TEC equal to his own can block it effectively with by concentrating, which can result in the move being a lot less effective than if their TEC was lower. Primes with a HIGHER TEC are completely immune to the move, and the effects of the above mentioned move are instead applied to him.

Blast From the Past — I'm confused about how this is applied....and kind of what it does. Ballad says "something related to the past", but....what does that even mean? Apologies if I'm just being slow and not catching something obvious here. Also, who is it marked as costing 600? The cons are also a bit awkwardly-worded. If the enemy's TEC is equal to or higher than his own they can block and lower its effectiveness, but if their TEC is higher...they're completely immune to it? Explain? :psy:

"Something related to the past" is more or less exactly what it says on the tin. He pulls up a memory of a past event of theirs and causes them to reexperience it.

I marked it as costing 600 due to it being a move that can deal debuffs overtime with the "image assault" part of it. This "image assault" is more or less tied to the reexperience thing, where if he says something, they'll reexperience the event so he could gain an advantage. That part of it in question only lasts thirty seconds, and any other mention of it afterwards won't do anything.

Looking at it, it probably doesn't cost 600, though I'll let you decide on that.

Last part was bad wording on my part.

With all that in mind, it all should be good. Approved at 300 OM.[/spoiler]



Nealaphh:
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Obsessive Complex Insertion - 600 OM (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Homing Proficiency Telepathy)

Nealaphh's eyes begin to emit a harsh white shine, and over the course of ten seconds, the Enigma engulfs the mind of an enemy with its influence so as to seed their subconscious thoughts with a material obsession; either a Philia or a Phobia. If Nealaphh gives the target a Philia, they are compelled to remain within at least ten feet of a given material object, living or otherwise. If Nealaphh instead gives the target a Phobia, they must remain at least ten feet away from a chosen material object.

The obsession lasts for ten seconds multiplied by the difference between Nealaphh and the Target's TEC scores. If they are even, the move has no effect. Nealaphh can have no more than one Philia and one Phobia active in two different targets at a time, and it must cast them seperately. Nealaphh needs to be able to see both the target and the object of obsession for the duration of the casting. If a target leaves the range of Nealaphh's telepathy, the effect fades.

Should be fine and dandy. Good to go.[/spoiler]



Eon Saverem:
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Punisher Cross (1200) (Ranged Proficiency) (Area Attack Proficiency)


The Punisher is 5'7" and weighs 300 lbs. Punisher has two machine guns in front and a rocket launcher in the back. The side arms of the cross open up to reveal a storage bin for eight Grader 2043 pistols (four on each side).

Machine Gun (300) (Ranged Proficiency)
The Punisher Cross is equipped with 2 machine guns at its base. Carrying 500 rounds, belt fed.A reliable rapid-fire weapon that can only be fired while stationary. Since the weapon itself weighs 300 lbs. and packs a bit of recoil, firing on the run is unadvised due to the fact it is nearly impossible to be accurate. Though not extremely powerful, it makes up with for it with its high rate of fire. This is effective at a medium to close range. At long range it is less effective. Reload time takes no less than one minute

Rocket Launcher (300) (Ranged Proficiency) (Area Attack Proficiency)
The Punisher Cross also is equipped with 2 rockets that can be fired from the Top end of the cross. A simple flip of the cross and mounting it on the shoulder allows Eon to fire a rocket at his target. The rocket must be aimed and fired. Only 2 rockets can be used during an encounter, needing at least 5 minutes to create a rocket (10 mins for both). Once fired the rockets move roughly as fast as an arrow. The impact causes a 10ft diameter explosion. This weapon is effective at Long and Medium range, but will hurt Eon if fired at short range due to area of effect.

Grader 2043 Auto-pistols (300) (Ranged Proficiency)
The Punisher Cross also comes equipped with 8 Grader 2043 auto-pistols. These are located in the arms of the cross. The Grader's barrel legnth is 5" and has a capacity of 7 rounds, and with one in the chamber it brings the total to 8. Noticeably weaker than other pistols of their caliber, this is due to the simple fact they’re throw away pistols. They are rapid-fire weapons, unlike the Machinegun of the Punisher Cross they have considerably less ammunition (64 shots total to be exact) but make up for the lack of ammunition by being able to be shot in both hands on the run. These are short range weapons and difficult to aim at long distances. They hit about as hard as a punch.

Just to clarify, before anything else, the Punisher is just a blanket move and the others are what it all entails/includes, yes?

Machine Gun — Some mention of how many rounds it can hold before needing a reload, and how long said reload takes.

Rocket Launcher — Why does this cost 600? Unless there's something I'm missing it would be fine at 300.

Grader 2043 Auto-pistols — Looks good.

The Punisher is the Blanket term and the others is what it entails, yes.
I made my edits in the Quote for the Machine gun, it is underlined.
And Lastly, I thought because the Rockets blast radius was 10ft it made it more. Just realized that just means it needs the Area prerequisite. So it's only 300 correct?

Move cost only goes up when variability comes into play. If the rockets could carry different types of warheads or the like, such as incendiary blasts or the regular ol' explosion, that'd be where the extra cost comes in.

But, with those added details and clarification, everything's set and good to go.[/spoiler]



Ruby:
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Buster Sword (300 OM - Requires Physical Strength): A weapon that Ruby brought back from the Hero's Graveyard, it is a simple giant sword that stands at roughly 6' with an approximately one foot wide blade. In a real world, the weapon would weigh at least 80 pounds, but due to Omniphysics it has been scaled to Ruby's own strength, proving only as heavy as her usual weapon, Crescent Rose.

(Upgrade for my NPC, Qrow Branwen) Upgrade - Greatsword (600 + 300 OM - Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency): Qrow wields a large, silver, single-edged sword with some kind of tribal pattern running along where the fuller would be. A pair of gunbarrels flank the blade at the hilt, connecting up to a circular clockwork mechanism that seems to accommodate all the different forms the weapon can take. A hole is located in the blade in front of the clockwork mechanism, and a pair of parallel handguards come downwards. The handle is crimson with a black pommel, and is long enough to accommodate both hands at different distances apart.

The weapon has four modes; the first is a compact mode, where the blade retracts in on itself, becoming around half the size it was and making it less of a burden to carry. The second is the sword itself, and the third is a long range shotgun, with a buckshot-like spread fired from each barrel. In this mode the blade is curved downwards, providing an open field for firing. The shotgun is accurate at a surprising fifteen meters, and after that the cone of buckshot begins to spread out more widely. The fourth and final mode creates Qrow's most proficient weapon; a scythe. The blade of his sword splits at multiple sections and begins to folds backwards, forming a seemingly awkward scythe with the blade on the outside. However, just before the handle of the weapon telescopes in two sections and extends, the blunt side of the blade opens up and a crimson blade emerges from the gap, completing the weapon.
Inactive Mode

Sword Mode

Gun Mode

Scythe Mode

Is good.[/spoiler]



Paul:
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So I am not sure how to create this, I assume it would be a move however.
Paul has "Voice". Think of it as a "these are not the droids you are looking for" kind of thing, though a bit more forceful. I was thinking of something like this?

Bene Gesserit Voice (300 OM)
By altering the tonal qualities of the voice, Paul can greatly influence others. This can only be used on characters who have a TEC score lower than or equal to Paul's. Voice can only be used for simple commands in combat, such as temporarily staying the hand of an opponent for a moment. It has diminishing returns and after a command or two the opponent will no longer be susceptible to it (conciser Paul's TEC 1 lower each time he uses it against the same opponent within the same thread/24 hours). It cannot be used to cause the user to harm themselves, directly control them ("walk over there and do 5 jumping jacks"), or effect them for more than a dozen seconds at best. It can be used to delay actions, make creatures already willing to take the suggested action do so ("You should kill him first. I'm much less a threat"), or if used subtlety nudge an opponent towards a course of action.

Thoughts?

Interesting deal you got here. I think It should be good to go... You'd need Telepathy for it; Debuff Proficiency, as well. And just as a note, due to the nature of those wacky ol' Omniphysics, it would only be able to effect people Paul can see or sense if you pick up Enhanced Senses. Aside from that...a few more details about how long/to what extent he can effect people and you'll be good to go.[/spoiler]



Somerland:
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Alternate Form: Sonny (2000): Over the course of 4 seconds, Somerled dissolves his body, allowing Sonny to use the magic to recreate his own body at the same time, essentially overwriting Somerled’s body.
Sonny, though he still has the same monstrous strength as his other half, doesn’t have the same drive to use it, and lacks combat experience. However, as a being who wields magic that destroys and disperses, he constantly has a field of dispersion magic around him that softens blows.
Attack: 4
Defense: 5
Speed: 1
Technique: 0

Bullwhip (Physical) (600): A recreation of the weapon given to Somerled during the Hero's Graveyard. It is a 10 foot long, 12 plait, kangaroo hide whip. While not one of the strongest weapons out there, when it hits something right, it can wrap around, allowing Somerled to either pull himself to it, or it to him. For some unknown reason, it plays the theme song to "Indiana Jones" whenever it's cracked.

Squall Step (Area Attack, Burst Movement) (300): Somerled surges forward, creating powerful gusts of wind along his path, which course outwards from said path much like the wake of a boat. The intense burst of air bowls over those he passes within a meter of, calming quickly thereafter and fading away completely by three meters. It’s a highly magic-intensive move, and although he can burst several times in quick succession, it drains his magic extraordinarily fast.

Alt Form: Is good.

Bullwhip: Beautiful. Approved.

Squall Step: How far can he cover with each burst?[/spoiler]



Weiss:
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Modifying flame dust:


Flame Dust - 900 OM (melee proficiency, debuff proficiency, Area proficiency.)

Weiss activates Myrtenaster's red dust cylinder with the help of her semblance, as the edges and the runes of her blade glow a cherry red. This energy can be used for two different things. When touched to another being or projectile, the energy usually explodes and repulses the entity or attack in question with a touch from the blade, causing no damage but sending them backwards 5 feet in a slightly random direction backwards from Weiss. heavier beings or those with a high defense stat may manage to just have their attacking limb flung back, however, and stand their ground.

Weiss can also use this ability to stab the ground, sending out a line of searing flame from the ground in front of Weiss. The attack is 2 feet wide and causes burning damage to those it touches. The flames move about as fast as an average human running at top speed. the max range is can reach is twenty feet.

Lastly, Weiss can throw a strong slash with this energy, creating a slash-shaped crescent wave of flame that is shaped like the arc of the slash weiss has thrown. This slash is capable of travelling up to 50 feet and is about as fast as a gunshot, and burns anything it hits. The slash moves directly forward in the same arc without changing. The flame slash moves about 50 meters per second.

also looking for Approval for:

Ice dust - 300 OM (requires ranged proficiency)

Weiss has recreated the ice dust of her homeland of remnant for use in myrtenaster. Weiss is capable of using Ice dust for the following effects:

Ice shards - Weiss is capable of creating shards of ice that Fire towards the target at the speed twice that of an arrow. these shards do not fly straight at their target, but with a curved shot forming a 120 degree arc, making them somewhat easy to dodge by a target running forward. However, Weiss is capable of Firing these shards rapidly, at a rate of two per second, allowing her to make up for their somewhat slow speed and lackluster ability to hit her chosen target with sheer volume. Weiss also has to deal with slight recoil while using this ability - with each shot pushing her back about a tenth of a meter.
These shards will be created to strike at an area or target of Weiss's choosing, and thus, while it can be difficult due to the delay with the shards, she can "lead" her shots.
Weiss creates these shards by slashing rapidly with Myrtenaster - thus, she needs to be holding the blade in order to fire them.

These blasts can reach a maximum range of 200 feet, taking longer to reach their opponent depending on distance.

Reposting with asked for edits.

Also looking for approval for:

Tier 1 Power-up - An Ivory Visor
Attack: +2
Speed: +2
Defense: +1

Description:

Obtained from unknown means, Weiss is capable of summoning this mask to her face in order to enhance her abilities. Brushing her hand across her face as though she is removing a mask, Weiss creates an ivory mask of bone across her face, as pale blue energy seems to stream from her body. Weiss's speed and strength increase drastically when using this form, and her durability increases to a small degree as well.


When this form is utilized, Weiss's voice becomes distorted during speech, and sounds like it's been layered with a different voice entirely. Her attacks and emotions also become more erratic, as the normally reserved huntress has increased difficulty controlling her emotions in this form.


Weiss's eyes turn black and gold during this transformation, and even if the mask is entirely smashed, they will appear as such until she ends the transformation. For the most part, the mask is fully attached to her face, and cannot be removed by any hand but her own, but will crack and break off if it's struck. It will also begin to fall apart if Weiss is starting to run out of energy to maintain it - the turn before Weiss is forced to end the transformation from lack of SP, the mask will start to break off on it's own to signify this. this has no effect on the actual power of the transformation.


Reference image:
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Everything good to go.[/spoiler]



Luger:
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Smoke Grenades-


[ Ranged proficiency, area proficiency ] 300 OM- Luger can distract the enemies to form a tactical retreat for when the going gets rough. Luger can summon these one at a time for about 30 seconds between summons. Luger uses a distraction and throws the smoke grenade down in a specific location. It takes about a few seconds to pull the pull ring. As it reachs the specific location, it takes a few seconds to the smoke to start, and it lasts about 1 to 2 minutes. The area it can block seeing is about 4"×1.5".

The area that this covers is extremely tiny, and wouldn't do much good at all. Even assuming you meant feet and not inches for the area it obscures, it still wouldn't....actually obscure very much. You uh...you wanna increase the area on that?[/spoiler]



Jupiter:
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Pistol - 300 OM, requires Ranged Proficiency

Jupiter usually carries a pistol. The weapon has a 3-bullet clip, and fires fairly quickly, about one a second. It's a good spacing weapon.

The pistol itself is silver, with a black clip. It's around 9 inches long and 7 inches tall.

A, uh...3 round clip? You sure there, hombre? Regardless, need the effective range for it.

Adding a second move real quick.


Overdrive Charge - Requires Physical Strength, Tier One Offensive Super, 600 OM

Jupiter runs forward, starting a powerful rush of attacks by overclocking his main machinery to up the power behind the strikes. After the first rush, he follows up with a sweeping kick, and ends with a downward slice. The overdrive is hard on his circuits, and will blow them if he uses this attack too much.

Good to go.[/spoiler]



Raal:
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Gaze Of The Damned - 600 OM (Requires ranged proficiency)
Raal glares as the red glow of his eyes shifts and grows beyond normal limits, as Raal charges this attack. For 1 to 3 seconds, Raal may charge a blast of twin, red beams of plasma directed from his gaze. The resulting attack has similar potency and qualities to a blaster or similar thermal weapon, being twin beams of concentrated heat. Raal's aim is determined by where he is looking, which is both a strength and a weakness - While it's very easy for Raal to adjust his aim, the attack is well-telegraphed. This attack has a range of about fifty feet, and moves at a rate of just below mach 1.

Looks good.[/spoiler]



Mickey:
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Steamboat Willie - Tier 2 Super Offensive
Mickey concentrates his omnilium to form an actual-size, completely grayscale steamboat. This means that when completely summoned, the steamboat is approximately 17 meters in length by 5.5 meters in width, with a depth of 2.4 meters. It takes Mickey approximately five minutes of unbroken concentration (Spirit Bomb style) to summon the Steamboat Willie because of its size, and if at any point an opponent lands a hit on Mickey, he will have to start all over again on summoning it. Once summoned, Mickey must make his way to the wheel and pilot the boat toward the opponent he wishes to ram into; however, the mouse is a bit rusty on his ship-piloting skills, so it is much more likely for him to make a hit on an opponent directly in the path of the steamboat. Turning is not his strong suit. The ship travels at a speed of 5mph. If the ship collides with an opponent, it does some pretty gnarly physical damage and knocks them back, but cannot be summoned again for the duration of battle as it takes a lot out of Mickey. This does have the potential to hit multiple opponents if they all happen to be within the Steamboat Willie's path, but once it crashes into the ground, it cannot be used again and will disappear within seconds.

I, uh... So. Majestic. :froggonk:

I am obligated to point out that with a 5-minute summon time that resets if you take a hit, you'll probably never be able to actually summon it. Like, at all. Unless you're fighting with an ally; even then it'd be tricky business. The actual move looks good to go though, iffen you wanna go through with it, hombre.[/spoiler]



Harley:
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Ranged Proficiency – 1000 OM
Move: Rub a Dub Dub- A small rubber ducky that is an explosive
Remote Control Proficiency – 600 OM
Move:Throws Rubber Ducky and it explodes when she wants it to ecg.

“Rub a Dub Duck Motherfucker” -300 Harley has little small rubber ducks, no larger than your average baseball. She uses them by throwing them at her enemy (or whatever she wanted to blow up), the bombs will either blow up instantly or she could have time timed to blow up. Example Harley throws a rubber ducky at a group of thugs one of them picks them up in confusion and then bam, bomb goes off. The bomb is meant to be as destructive (blast radius ecg) as one stick of dynamite per duck. These bombs are most effective when they hit in direct/close combat of target.

Don't actually need to get proficiencies and such approved. It actually just confused me as to what you were doing for a minute there. :psy:

That said, it'd actually be a 600 OM move due to being boom on contact or a timed blast. Further mention of whether or not she can have more than one out at a time for the timed variant; and what the actual/approximate blast size is.[/spoiler]



Ryner:
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Mizuchi(300, Ranged)
Ryner shouts a similar incantation to Izuchi, with the same insignia on the spell but a different phrase. Ryner will speak out "What I seek is the water Cloud! Mizuchi!". After he shouts this incantation, a burst of water will spew forth from the glyph, drenching his foe and knocking them far back from the pressure, though it won't cause much damage.

Flare Burst(300 Ranged)
For this spell, Ryner must simply make the glyph and shout. "Flare burst!", before a medium sized fireball is shot out and explodes at the target point upon impact, causing damage.

Spirit Beast Defensive (300, Requires Burst Movement, Super Jumping)
Ryner will spin his are above his head and shout "I offer up this contract to bear the wicked spirit beast that sleeps within the earth!", while 3 red circles surround his body and descend down. After shouting this incantation, Ryner has increased mobility(fluff, basically explaining his burst and super jump), in which he can move up to double his speed in short bursts or jump higher than normal.

Spirit Beast Offensive(300, requires ranged, remote control)
Similar execution to its defensive counterpart, except Ryner shouts "I offer up this contract, to unleash the magic beast of light which dances through the skies!" After shouting this, three whitish-blue spirit wolves come from behind him to attack his target, using his hand to control who they attack. They attack their target as normal wolves but are cold to the touch.

Mizuchi — How long it takes to do all that business with the incantation, and how far the water burst reaches and pushes the target back.

Flare Burst — Casting time, effective range, blast size.

Spirit Beast Defensive — Wouldn't actually need to be a move, if it's just the explanation for his powers in-Omniverse.

Spirit Beast Offensive — Casting time, how long the wolves stick around, how far they can go from Ryner, if it's possible to destroy them and if so how easy/difficult it is.[/spoiler]



Demetri:
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Satchel of the Void(600 Tier 1 - Defensive, Area Shield, Ranged)

Demetri is able to flood his satchel with omnilium, increasing its capacity and size. When he does so he is stationary, charging up for about 3 seconds before unleashing his satchel, turning it into a black hole. Energetic attacks are sucked into it and dissipate. Physical weapons(that are currently equipped are sucked towards it, and if their wielder doesn't have a solid grip it is sucked into the satchel, Demetri gaining its use via Pickpocket. The frontal area of wherever the satchel is facing has the highest effect, a 15-meter wide, 60 degree cone that stretches for 10 meters, its effects less powerful the further it is. Areas outside the cone but within 5 meters of Demetri will still feel the tug, but unless the weapon is completely unhanded, it wont have much effect. This move lasts about it 5 seconds, but can only be used once per fight.

All good.[/spoiler]



Red Hood:
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Dual Combat knifePhysical Proficiency) 300 OM- Two 12 inch serrated blades with leather grips.

Not sure if I needed to post this since I'm just adding a second knife but here you go.

You're all good, muchacho.[/spoiler]