02-25-2016, 01:26 PM
Looking for some critique on this ability:
Cero - 900 OM.
Weiss holds out her hand, and a blood red orb appears a few inches ahead of her palm. This orb gets progressively smaller, producing a steady whine, before exploding outward into a wide, destructive beam of red energy in the direction Weiss's palm points toward. This attack can be charged from between 1 to 5 seconds, with it's damage and range depending on charge time. Charging the ability for 1 second results in an attack that's likely to only cause minor damage to anyone without significantly low defense compared to Weiss's attack stat, and reaches only a total of 20 feet, while a fully charged blast can reach a total of 50 feet and is capable of causing much more significant damage if the blast fully hits..
Using this, if she's not already using her mask, causes her eyes to briefly change to black with yellow pupils.
While Weiss can be in motion while charging this attack, she can not do anything but charge the ability until she fires the shot. Thus, charging and firing after she's in the air or mid-jump is possible, for instance, but she cannot walk, dodge, or otherwise independently move her body until she fires the cero. anything that completely breaks Weiss's focus mid-charge can potentially cause the orb to blow up pre-maturely, exploding in Weiss's face as a result.
Cero - 900 OM.
Weiss holds out her hand, and a blood red orb appears a few inches ahead of her palm. This orb gets progressively smaller, producing a steady whine, before exploding outward into a wide, destructive beam of red energy in the direction Weiss's palm points toward. This attack can be charged from between 1 to 5 seconds, with it's damage and range depending on charge time. Charging the ability for 1 second results in an attack that's likely to only cause minor damage to anyone without significantly low defense compared to Weiss's attack stat, and reaches only a total of 20 feet, while a fully charged blast can reach a total of 50 feet and is capable of causing much more significant damage if the blast fully hits..
Using this, if she's not already using her mask, causes her eyes to briefly change to black with yellow pupils.
While Weiss can be in motion while charging this attack, she can not do anything but charge the ability until she fires the shot. Thus, charging and firing after she's in the air or mid-jump is possible, for instance, but she cannot walk, dodge, or otherwise independently move her body until she fires the cero. anything that completely breaks Weiss's focus mid-charge can potentially cause the orb to blow up pre-maturely, exploding in Weiss's face as a result.
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