02-25-2016, 01:20 AM
I'm gonna be that guy and suggest part 3 of Arrival of the Noah, the story arc between Kanda and I (but mostly Kanda). I suggest part 3 because it has the most writing by far- and boy, it's terribly dense.
I would actually like some critique of my writing in particular; I feel like I haven't quite been able to write with that same certain freshness to my content as I could before.
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I would actually like some critique of my writing in particular; I feel like I haven't quite been able to write with that same certain freshness to my content as I could before.
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