Jacket (Joining)

[Strazio Rockwell]

Hey Jacket, welcome to the Omniverse!

Sorry it took a bit to get to your application, a good portion of the staff has been preoccupied with our current saga.

Your history and descriptions look fine.

Your moves do need a little bit of work, I'll note some specifics, but I do recommend readingthis. I also would recommend listing the proficiencies required next to each move for clarity's sake.

Wooden Baseball Bat - This needs a better description, how large/long is it? How tiring is it to swing?

Jacket's Piece - How many bullets can this fire and what is the rate of fire? What is the effective range on the weapon? How long is the reload time?

Utility Hammer - Same as the baseball bat.

Molotov Cocktail - How far can you throw this? How large of an area does it affect? Is it more like a grenade with a single burst of damage or does it leave a lingering effect? How many do you have or how long does it take for you to summon/make a new one?

Winchester M1887 - Same as Jacket's Piece.

Overall your moves are lacking in specifics, we try to keep moves as unambiguous as possible so as to avoid confusion when dealing with others.