02-16-2016, 11:57 AM
First question: Yes! Everyone can always use more detail, or at least some trimming and adjusting. You tend to stick to what's going on in your character's head I've noticed, if you would like I could dig up examples and advice on how to improve character vs. environment?
Second question: A saga might help, but it would be sort of hard to keep writing all alone without anything to react to or someone for your character to interact with. If you'd like I could write with you once this whole Graveyard event is finished, either as an NPC Secondary or whatever you'd like. Not Jade or Crowley, but I could definitely invent a fun secondary. Either way, you'll need someone to bounce ideas off of, and I'm more than willing to be that person! :-)
Second question: A saga might help, but it would be sort of hard to keep writing all alone without anything to react to or someone for your character to interact with. If you'd like I could write with you once this whole Graveyard event is finished, either as an NPC Secondary or whatever you'd like. Not Jade or Crowley, but I could definitely invent a fun secondary. Either way, you'll need someone to bounce ideas off of, and I'm more than willing to be that person! :-)
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