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I want people to criticize my portrayal of Jak

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I want people to criticize my portrayal of Jak
Jak Mar Offline
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02-16-2016, 10:57 AM
They say criticizing only helps the writer work on things that need to be worked on.

-Do i need to work on more detail?
-Do i need a saga that helps Jak sort out his "sides" as his one being?
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[Image: Darkdata.png]Jak/Mar- Dynamite Kid/ DA 2018" (Translated text)[Image: hVDTXBF.gif](Thanks Ezzy!)

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