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Join request: Red Hood
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Hi there welcome to the Omniverse!

Just a few things before we can get you set up.

This is mostly a personal recommendation, but I would recommend that you expand your history a bit. It gives other writers a better sense of your character and helps us understand what you're talking about when you reference things in your past such as the "Lazarus Pit". Not required, but highly recommended.

What I do need you to add to your history is at what point your character was taken to the Omniverse.

Also I know this isn't an OC but can you link a picture of them or write a physical description so other writers can describe them easily without having to use google?

Also formatting your moves like this helps with readability and clarification, espcially for stranger moves.
Buster Sword (requires Physical Strength) – 300 OM

Combat Knife - I would remove the punchy portion and just describe the knife itself, it is assumed your character can throw standard punches without needing a specific move.

Dual Pistols - How many shots can each pistol fire before needing to reload? How long does it take to reload each pistol? What is the average rate of fire? What is the effective range?

Batarang - How far can you throw this? How many can you throw, and how quickly can you throw them?

Flashbang - This needs Debuff proficiency and how far can you throw the grenade? How long are enemies blinded for? How many times can you use this ability before needing to restock?
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