02-04-2016, 12:10 PM
Hi there! Welcome to the Omniverse!
Your history is good! I do have some comments on your moves.
Magic Missiles- This move is mostly good but how long does it take to cast(as i understand the deck is completely RP flavor so thats fine) and how many missiles can he toss out at someone.
Air Wall- Same question. How much time? And how much air is he blowing? Does it cover his body or is it a small patch he chooses?
Basic Scribing- If this move sole purpose is RP flavor then it will cost you nothing. Being able to heat up objects is completely fine, moving objects is easily done through telekinesis, and I'm not sure what you mean by providing Raw energy so if you could describe what that does a bit better. So feel free to rewrite this move and I'll get you going.
Your history is good! I do have some comments on your moves.
Magic Missiles- This move is mostly good but how long does it take to cast(as i understand the deck is completely RP flavor so thats fine) and how many missiles can he toss out at someone.
Air Wall- Same question. How much time? And how much air is he blowing? Does it cover his body or is it a small patch he chooses?
Basic Scribing- If this move sole purpose is RP flavor then it will cost you nothing. Being able to heat up objects is completely fine, moving objects is easily done through telekinesis, and I'm not sure what you mean by providing Raw energy so if you could describe what that does a bit better. So feel free to rewrite this move and I'll get you going.
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