Official Move Approval III

[Gilgamesh]

Move Name : Grave Rot
Type: Attack, Debuff
Cost: 300 OM

Grundy focuses the necrotic and elemental energy that drives his undead body, tensing up and flexing his muscles. After focusing for about five seconds, he releases a blast of noxious and corrosive swamp gas from his mouth and pores. Anyone engaged in close proximity or physical combat with him breathes in the toxic air and is overwhelmed with a coughing fit, watering eyes, and ragged breathing as the quasi-magical energy eats at their defenses. This ability takes a long time to recharge, and the gas around Grundy dissipates after about fifteen seconds.

How much is "a long time" in a general sense? Minutes, half a minute? Other than that it seems good.

Gatling Bazooka (Tier 1 Super Move) (Requires Ranged Proficiency) (800)

Toybox Girl warps in a huge red and black Gatling Bazooka, the weapon bigger than she is, onto her right backpack arm. The long bazooka sports an aiming screen that, held properly, sits in front of her face. She then takes aim and the Gatling Bazooka starts to rev-up and rotating its cannon. It starts firing a barrage of semi-accurate fast mini-Bazooka shells at her target. After 40 shells, of which 20-30 will hit on average, the Gatling Bazooka runs out and Toybox Girl discards the weapon which warps out. Despite its size,Toybox Girl can easily carry it and fly around with the weapon as she keeps it aimed at her opponent. Because of the lack of accuracy TBG should be no more than 30 feet away from her target for best results.

Battling Bazooka- How strong are the shells themselves so we can know how many is a good amount. As for the other two that's gonna have to pass by Omni like Minato said.

How's that? 20-30, and the move has an effectiveness range now, of 30 feet. Being inaccurate she needs to be close to get enough hits in

This is good

Natural Claws- When Jak changes to Dark Jak, a dark beastly form of himself, he gains a initial transformation stun to paralyze opponents upon activation. As Jak contains dark eco in his system, the dark eco stun does not work on himself. The only weakness of this stun is that it cannot be used against Dark Jak in a fight.

See stun here, lighting coming out of Dark Jak.


Tier 1 Offensive Super Move- Dark Bomb- (Requires Physical Strength, Slam, Area Attack Proficiency) 300 OM- Dark Jak jumps up in the air and aims his fist toward the ground, causing a shockwave of dark eco to spread across the ground, pushing back an enemy about 15 feet. It takes Dark Jak about a few seconds to jump and hit the ground. The radius of Dark Jak's dark bomb attack is a large radius about the shape of a very large circle.

Natural Claws- I think the Claws and Paralysis should be different moves. Also describe how long the stun and is it area of effect or?

Dark Bomb- Could you tell the radius approximately in numbers?