01-25-2016, 09:11 PM
Jams Bolero Wrote:Augmented Broom - 600 (Physical, Debuff)
Akin to a staff, but can sweep dust into the eyes of one person (enough to shroud a normal human head) from up to 6 feet away. Must be in a dusty area to use, like a desert or a dusty room. Can be used immediately with a 3 second cooldown to blind a single person at a time.
How long are they blinded for? And maybe instead of Cooldown do a charge time?
Desco Wrote:Frenzy! - Tier 2 Power Up
Dseco stretches out all of her power and a purple aura of power flows around her attacking fast and relentless.
Att: +5
Def: +0
Spd: +5
Tec: +0
This is fine
Trixie Wrote:Broly Wrote:Green Orb (Ranged Proficiency) - 300 OM
Winding up his closed fist Broly summons a bright and translucent neon green energy to his palm over a few seconds. The size of the orb is adjusted based on how much Broly wants to open his hand, ranging from the size of a golf ball to the size of a softball. This ability is ambidextrous and can be used from either hand, but only one at a time. The explosive capability of Green Orb is average; it's meant to be a low cost low damage attack. The summoned energy is meant to be thrown not held and will dissipate if not used. Once released the first thing it hits will detonate the orb, unleashing it's payload. Effective range is about forty yards with the attack petering out and dissipating shortly after forty five yards.
@Gilgamesh: I'm inclined to disagree that a fragmentation grenade could shatter concrete, but you're the boss. The size of the orb is cosmetic. Changed up the description as per your request.
I personally don't know the size of explosion a fragmentation grenade giiiives soo....yeah sorry about that. This is fine as is.
Amaterasu Wrote:Super Move T1 - Celestial Brush: Power Slash - 600, Requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency
Amaterasu uses the magic brush that is at the end of her hair, turning the very world before her into her canvas. She draws a horizontal straight line into the air and/or onto an object or being, saying "kiru" (japanese verb, meaning "cut") as she does. After a brief delay, an invisible sword delivers a huge slash up to ten meters beyond where the ink was drawn, on the side opposite of Amaterasu's (thus if Amaterasu stood on the left and drew the line in the middle, the slash would happen on the right). The slash can hit multiple objects and people if they are caught in its effect.
For around one second, the kanji 斬 (zan, meaning "beheading", "murder" or "kill") also appears in the air above Amaterasu as the slash happens, this is a cosmetic effect that does not influence the move itself.
Celestial Brush: Galestorm - 300, requires Ranged Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency
Amaterasu uses the magic brush that is at the end of her hair, turning the very world before her into her canvas. She draws a "wind" symbol (this here) into the air in front of her, while saying "kaze" (japanese noun, meaning "wind"). This creates a powerful wind of around 3 meters wide and 2,5 meters tall, that horizontally blows from behind her in the direction she is currently facing. Small, light objects and projectiles caught in the wind can be blown away by this.
Other beings can move through the wind, but it takes a great deal of effort to move towards Amaterasu. Someone with less defense than Amaterasu's attack stat can only move at a fraction of that speed - for instance, if Amaterasu has 3 attack and uses this against a Prime with 2 defense, they would be able to move at roughly 2/3rds of their normal speed, without considering Super Speed, Burst Movement, Teleportation etc. However, if their defense is equal or superior to Amaterasu's attack stat they can move towards her against the wind, though it still takes some effort to do so.
Amaterasu must focus entirely on using Galestorm and has to stand still as long as she continues to channel it. The maximum duration that she can cast Galestorm for is ~8 seconds. It drains a small amount of energy which rapidly accumulates if used continuously or for many times in succession, using it for its maximum duration without break would leave her physically exhausted and needing to catch her breath for a bit.
For around one second, the kanji 風 (kaze, wind) appears also appears in the air above Amaterasu as she begins casting Galestorm, this is a cosmetic effect that does not influence the move itself.
Note: Just to be clear as the two moves are similar in their name and with some parts of the description. Celestial Brush: Galestorm is not a Super Move, just a normal one.
The Super Move- This will cost 1200 cause of either targeting many people or just one.
Gale storm seems fine with the caveats you specified.
Mickey Mouse Wrote:Hi,
Blue Kingdom Hearts (Tier 2 Defensive Super Move): In addition to the Yellow Kingdom Hearts created by Organization XIII, Mickey and his master, Yen Sid, also attempted to create a replica of the original Kingdom Hearts, which the mouse has also learned to harness the energy of. In order to activate this move, Mickey draws a heart in the air with the tip of his Keyblade; any projectile that passes through the heart is absorbed by the Keyblade, and then, after being charged to its maximum potential -- a process which takes about three average-damage projectiles -- Mickey slams the Keyblade into the ground. The ground on either side of the Keyblade's tip begins to crack, and out of that crack a huge wall of blue energy erupts forth, defending Mickey and anyone else behind it. The wall is approximately ten meters long, five meters on either side of Mickey, and about five meters high. It is completely opaque, so Mickey and his allies cannot see what the enemy is doing on the other side; the barrier appears, blocks an attack of with equal or lower strength than the shield itself (so a Tier 2 Super Attack or lower) and then shatters.
Approved
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