01-23-2016, 06:29 PM
Hmmmm... the move is good, though I've spotted a typo. "Both fire attacks last for 5 seconds." Reword that as it's only one fire attack now. Also, it still says Match is 900 Om in other parts of the document. Both should be easy fixes though.
History is a tad vague. Please at least add one sentence that insinuates what happened in those few months of off screen time, like for example: "Shrek would spend the next few months leading a relatively uneventful life with his family, that is until he was taken by Omni."
Make those changes, and you'd be all set to go!
History is a tad vague. Please at least add one sentence that insinuates what happened in those few months of off screen time, like for example: "Shrek would spend the next few months leading a relatively uneventful life with his family, that is until he was taken by Omni."
Make those changes, and you'd be all set to go!
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