01-20-2016, 01:45 AM
That was a really well written critique! Thanks for all the time you put into it, and I will totally work on those issues you mentioned. Now that you laid tjem out, it's easier for me to see where I can improve. And yeah, I know I have a bad habit of repeating words, I was actually worried about that for most of the posts. Thanks again, and I can't wait to see the result.
“I don’t wanna be a product of my environment. I want my environment to be a product of me.”