David Stephenson

[Gilgamesh]

Much better but a few more changes are needed.

You say being in a better emotional state will enhance David and the weapon but there are no self buffs unless in that sense unless your talking about a power up. The rest of the gun itself seems better.

Avatar Jimmy: This is better but you're going to need a move that makes jimmy do a certain action. He could pin an opponent, he could punch or attack or defend you. You're going to need to specify and make a move for each of these potential actions