01-12-2016, 12:28 PM
Thank you very much for your response 
Made edits to reflect your advice, though admittedly I'm still worried about the gun description. I wanted to keep the detail in, but tried to add a more general, simplified description at the start of the section. I also removed the one-shot thing from the secondary fire, though I had that more for non-primes, regular humans and so forth. Is that realistic, or is everyone on a comparable level of power to primes?

Made edits to reflect your advice, though admittedly I'm still worried about the gun description. I wanted to keep the detail in, but tried to add a more general, simplified description at the start of the section. I also removed the one-shot thing from the secondary fire, though I had that more for non-primes, regular humans and so forth. Is that realistic, or is everyone on a comparable level of power to primes?
