David Stephenson

[Gilgamesh]

Hi there! Welcome to the Omniverse

Your history is very well written but at the very end you need to state when he was taken by Omni, whether it be a specific day or just be vague about it like one random day he got taken and then your history will be fine.

For your Gun- How many bullets can it hold, how long does it take to reload?

Also could you please rephrase the first part. It sounds a little confusing. Maybe if you reword it like "At his normal mood the gun will fire normally but as his mental state gets worse the gun reflects that through minor malfunctions" or maybe something along the lines like that. All the if's get a little confusing and this encompasses a lot more while being clear.

The second function is the same thing about the wording. Also "one shot kill" is never going to happen so probably take that out there.

Avatar: Jimmy- Yeah no independent moves. You may have a move that summons jimmy to do a pin or something but only assists can be independent