Need a buddy?

[Kelsier]

Good evening to all. I was wondering if I more experienced player can lend me a measure of succor and aid in designing my OC. He's a bit difficult to properly explain, but suffice to say that he's a human spirit suffering from amnesia. I have him pretty well hashed out, but I want to ensure that I have everything reasonably well-balanced before commencing play. The more opinions the better! Thank you.

Edit: Currently PMing with Teal Kunnochi. My heartfelt thanks to xir. However, as stated above, extra opinions are never a bad thing.