Official Move Approval III

[Gilgamesh]

Entropic Aegis, Tier Two Defensive Super Move (Requires Area Shield Proficiency, 800 OM)
Digging his withered claws into his deceased palm, Okor extends his arm, remembering how the world should be: How it should wind down to an end, wither away to a cold and empty void after life plays out its last. This belief manifests itself in a ward 7 meters in diameter centered on his left palm. The shield saps the energy and life from whatever touches it: Projectiles slow and rust, bouncing harmlessly off of armour or falling to the ground. Lasers have their heat sapped away by the weight of aeons, able to maintain little more than their light. Blades rust and dull as they pass through, shattering on contact with his armour. Fists rot away into dust, the unfortunate owner of said fist watching their own hand disintegrate as the flesh sloughs off, turning into a necrotic sludge. For obvious reasons, these effects end once the offending appendage or blade is removed from the shield. This shield lasts for 7 seconds, after which it dissipates.

This is fine.

Blue Mode: Tier 1 Super Attack Move (requires Remote Control Proficiency, requires Telekinesis) - 600 OM


Pretty much Sans' trump card when it comes to combat. Blue Mode is a super move that comes into use whenever Sans believes it is needed. When he wants to use it, he raises one of his hands, palm facing his opponent. The target then suddenly turns a dark shade of blue, and is now able to be tossed around like a ragdoll by Sans, and is more or less at the mercy of Sans. This lasts a prime total of 15 seconds, though Sans can end it before the time limit is up, depending on whether or not he is running out of energy.

The way it functions is that, in the split second it usually takes to activate the move, Sans is accessing the opponent's "soul" and change its color, which represents the "souls" function. Here, Blue Mode subjects the "soul" to gravity based on Sans whim alone, allowing him to basically throw his target around in whatever direction he finds fitting using just his outstretched hand, doing substantial damage in the process.

There are downsides to "Blue Mode," however. For starters, it requires a huge amount of energy and concentration from Sans, preventing him from using it often. Secondly, the only way he can damage his opponent in Blue Mode is to toss them around, as the move itself doesn't do any damage. Finally, like all of his moves, he cannot use Blue Mode in conjunction with all of his other moves.

This sounds more like a transformation than anything else. I would suggest that it could be worded differently in order to make it sound more super movey. Like maybe Sans throws him on the ground so hard it deals damage or maybe Sans throws him directly into some bones that deal damage rather than the entire throwing ordeal. Also 15 seconds of tossing around sounds much worse than 2 Damage.

Alternate Form: Strong Fist Taijutsu (2000 OM)
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Developed by Might Guy, Konohagakure’s ‘Green Beast’, the Strong Fist style is exactly what one would expect. With a complete lack of talent in any shinobi art, Guy has been forced to focus all of his training on honing his martial art skills, perfecting his own unique style of fighting in the process. Characterized by fast, crushing blows, this style can be seen as an all-out offensive. Having been Might Guy’s rival since they were children, Kakashi has witnessed the style innumerable times and has begun to mimic and utilize some of its more basic maneuvers in battle. For users such as Guy and Rock Lee, this style is strengthened (and its downsides lessened) through constant training and advanced use of the Eight Inner Gates. As Kakashi lacks the extreme conditioning of Guy and Lee, his blows (though stronger than his normal strikes) can be somewhat inaccurate and his defenses remain low.

Stats:
ATK: 4
DEF: 1
SPD: 4
TEC: 1

Alternate Form: Gentle Fist Taijutsu (2000 OM)
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The trademark fighting style of Konohagakure’s Hyūga clan, Gentle Fist is characterized by its broad stance and wide, sweeping movements. As the name suggests, the style does not seem overtly offensive; most strikes are either palm blows or quick fingertip jabs. To one ignorant of the technique, the blows struck appear to be mere ‘gentle’ strikes to random parts of the body. In truth, those of the Hyūga clan are capable of inflicting severe damage to underlying organ systems (primarily the chakra network) using this style in tandem with their visual prowess. Having witnessed the fighting style many times through his life, Kakashi has managed to grasp the fundamentals of the style’s motions and footwork. As he lacks the Hyūga clan’s famed dojustu, he is incapable of inflicting the crippling blows the style is known for; in fact, taking on this stance effectively neuters his offensive ability due to lack of practice. Instead, he uses the sweeping circular movements and broad stance to bolster his defenses, allowing him to protect vital areas and stall more offense-heavy foes while countermeasures are determined.

Stats:
ATK: 1
DEF: 4
SPD: 1
TEC: 4

This is good