12-18-2015, 11:07 PM
Update!
Alright, this one is majorly important for plenty of reasons.
First off, summaries are complete. Because of this, I need some people who are willing to read them and critique them. If need be, I also have character sheets for most of the characters, but not all of them, that will hopefully explain some things.
To those who wish to do this, simply reply, but I must ask not to spoil the story AT ALL for anyone. Seriously.
Second, I added a couple of other characters and removed one. The one that was removed I thought was interesting at first, but then I realized made little sense in the story and was therefore redundant.
Oh, and I changed the name of the Antagonist.
Anyways, for those who want a looksie, please postsie.
Alright, this one is majorly important for plenty of reasons.
First off, summaries are complete. Because of this, I need some people who are willing to read them and critique them. If need be, I also have character sheets for most of the characters, but not all of them, that will hopefully explain some things.
To those who wish to do this, simply reply, but I must ask not to spoil the story AT ALL for anyone. Seriously.
Second, I added a couple of other characters and removed one. The one that was removed I thought was interesting at first, but then I realized made little sense in the story and was therefore redundant.
Oh, and I changed the name of the Antagonist.
Anyways, for those who want a looksie, please postsie.
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