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Official Move Approval III
Adam Gaite Wrote:Bringing some of my own moves to the table here.

Déjà fu -- 600 OM (Requires: Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
With a second to focus, Adam can layer a single regular attack of his — a punch, or kick, or a shot from his rifle — to 'stock' and have ready. At any point within twenty seconds afterward, he can cause the effects of that attack to repeat themselves. A second impact identical to the first, in the same location, would strike at his opponent, a second shot of laser fire would suddenly blast from out of nowhere aimed at the same initial target.

Chronozap -- 300 OM (Requires: Ranged Proficiency, Time Manipulation)
A simple flick of the hand, akin to tossing a pebble or something, is all it takes to kick off this attack. It fires a small spark or bolt of distorted time, travelling with speed very similar to a bullet fired from an average handgun. It travels out to about thirty meters before losing effectiveness, and upon impact with anything with its range it releases a burst of fizzling static and rips time apart in its (very small; only a few inches) radius, both aging and de-aging the affected location at the same time. The effect is very unpleasant and painful, but not overly debilitating in and of itself. It is only the relative rapidity with which such bolts can be fired that make them dangerous at all, with Adam being able to hurl them just slightly faster than once per second, and the effects growing more intense the more that hit the same location.

Chronophage -- 300 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation)
Holding out one hand, Adam creates a field of distorted time, roughly thirty inches across. Manifesting it takes approximately a second, but it can be sustained for up to ten seconds before time's normal flow returns. The shield is capable of destroying minor projectiles and weapons that come in contact with it. Melee weapons may find themselves rusting or crumbling away, only to reform completely fine once out of the affected radius, while projectiles such as bullets or arrows or other minor weapons will simply disintegrate without a trace. When this shield does fade away, there is a short pause before it can be readied again, and using it too rapidly in succession is ill-advised due to the energy costs.

Off the Handle -- 0 OM (Requires: Time Manipulation, maybe Area Attack?)
Sometimes, when Adam just completely loses his temper, things get a little....weird. Time in the immediate area around him, for about two meters in every direction, just flips its shit and starts lurching around, slingshotting between past, present and future, causing the ground under him to pile up, erode into a depression, revert to its normal state, and plant life to rapidly regress or advance in age, withering away and rejuvenating to its prime, walls and structures to weather and crack, restore themselves to fresh construction states, and the like. These effects are temporary and do not extend beyond the usage of this 'technique', and immediately cease when Adam gets his shit together (or gets smacked out of it), and accomplish just a little bit less than nothing, though it might be good for messing with someone's head.

Ruby Fist Tier 2 Super Attack -- 800 OM (Requires: Physical Strength)
Taking a moment to prepare, Adam's entire body is enshrouded in a red aura, and he seems to flicker as he rapidly phases in and out of sync with the 'normal' flow of time. When he is ready, he explodes into motion, making for his target with all due speed and releases a thundering volley of punches with such tremendous force and speed it fades to literally a blur of red, seeming to bombard his target with hundreds of blows in only an instant, finishing with one massive uppercut that strikes like a piledriver, knocking his opponent flying.

Deja Fu - So you're using Time Manipulation to create a second attack that is delayed and not visible?

With Punches and Kicks, would it be like a phantom fist just comes out of nowhere and attacks his opponent? Also, does this attack aim itself at Adam's opponent, or does it just aim at where his opponent was when he first activated Deja Fu? Why is this 600 (is it supposed to be a super move)?

Chronozap - It's a projectile made of time(?) that will rip into an enemy, if hit in the same spot a lot of times? How draining are these to use?

Chronophage - How long is the short pause until it can be used again?

Off the Handle - This, to me, is fine as long as the actual time distortions will not effect anyone but the environment around Adam and his opponent. Also as long as the aging and de-aging of the environment does not effect the battle in any way.

Ruby Fist - Good to Go my man.
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