12-15-2015, 05:41 PM
Sasuke Uchiha Wrote:Explosive Tag
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[spoiler][/spoiler](Area Attack Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency)(600 OM)
Also known as a paper bombs, they are scraps of paper inscribed with a special writing, centering around the kanji word for "explode" (爆, baku). Infused with chakra, they will explode after a set amount of time, remotely, or after being ignited by flame. The tags can be attached to a surface or wrapped around a weapon to be thrown at an enemy. They are very versatile and one of the basic ninja tools. As one would expect from an explosive, it deals a large amount of splash damage to those within its area of effect (About 3 meters) as well as knocking them back. Readying the tag takes a few seconds of uninterrupted concentration, as does detonating it. Setting off any more than a few at a time can be taxing on the user and lead to fatigue.
Body Replacement Justsu
Tiger, Boar, Ox, Dog, Snake
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[spoiler][/spoiler](Foresight, Burst Movement)(300 OM)
In the moments where the user foresees an attack, with this jutsu they are able to substitute their body with a decoy that has undergone transformation jutsu to look exactly like them. The decoy takes the damage instead. The decoy is usually made of, but not limited to, wooden logs (Any inanimate object will do). This creates an optical illusion, making the enemy think the attack was successful. From this, the user can use the lapse in the enemy's attention to their advantage. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise.
Sword of Kusanagi
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(Physical Strength)(300 OM)
The artifact Sasuke won from Dante’s Abyss doesn’t even need to be active in order to be formidable weapon. Though it lacks the electric might in its passive form, it still has the harsh bite of sharp steal. Best used for piercing and slashing, the blade adequately fits the guile and speed of Sasuke Uchiha. With a black scabbard and matching hilt, it was known to be a larger size than a normal chokutō.
• Overall Length: 94
• Blade Length: 78.25
• Handle Length: 15.75
I'm not certain on prices or power/proficiency prerequisites, but I think I am in the right ballpark. Let me know what needs changing. Oh, and I want to make my Substitution Jutsu to be a Super Defense as well as a regular move!
Just detail checking and pointing out the obvious, here, as I am good at doing.
For Explosive Tag, how many can he set at a time? You say it's taxing to set off more than a few at a time, but is there actually a limit to how many, or does it just get more and more exhausting to set/detonate more at once? For that matter, if detonating more than once, are they all detonated at once, or in sequence? Does it take longer to set them off if there are multiple tags? And one final question, is there a specific range as to how far Sasuke can be from any set tags and still be able to detonate them? If not, I would advise limiting it to within range of sight, or Enhanced Senses when/if you get that power.
Body Replacement Jutsu — For this one I'd recommend Stealth and/or Suppression, just to make the trick work better. Of course, against foes who are faster than you or have higher TEC it may not work so well, and Enhanced Senses would probably mitigate it as well, but as things stand the move is just fine. As far as making this one a Super Move as well, that would be fine, just type it up as with any other move and specify which Tier for paperwork purposes and such.
Sword of Kusanagi — Assuming those measurements are in centimeters? That's kind of an important thing to clarify. Other than that detail it looks good.
Thaal Sinestro Wrote:Magus' Scythe Requires Physical Strength, Ranged Proficiency, 600 OM
The blade known as "Doom" is one of the most terrifying symbols of pain and suffering the people of Guardia. The scythe stands about seven feet long and ends in a long, curved steel blade.
Infused with a portion of Magus' magic, it can be summoned or dismissed in a puff of black and people smoke, and cast blade-shaped shadows as projectiles.
The shadow blades travel a maximum of thirty feet before fading away. It these blades can be cast as quickly as bandit can swing the massive weapon, which usually means no more than one every second.
Building up quite the armory there. Good to go.
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