12-15-2015, 01:59 PM
At last the results are in for the conclusion of the semifinals!
Bandit with no name :
The character you portrayed was amazing, the way you used her personality in the fight had me hooked from the start. Another piece that really impressed me and stuck with me was this :
Description & Clarity: 3.5
Voice: 4
Character: 4.5
Story: 4.5
Grammar: 4
Total : 20.5
Magus
What an amazing writer you are ! I am honestly impressed in how well you can make a reader feel tense during your posts. The moment you aged Bandit was one of the best, it really grasped me as Magus took revenge for his sight by unleashing this terrible curse on her.
Description & Clarity: 4
Voice: 4
Character: 4
Story: 4
Grammar: 4
Total : 20
Winner : Bandit With No Name
Congrats, it's well earned! Good luck in the final match!
Bandit with no name :
The character you portrayed was amazing, the way you used her personality in the fight had me hooked from the start. Another piece that really impressed me and stuck with me was this :
Quote: “There is so much more I can take from you,” he whispered, allowing her mind to imagine which nightmares he would indulge her with.You took control of Magus and really created an amazing scene.
Description & Clarity: 3.5
Voice: 4
Character: 4.5
Story: 4.5
Grammar: 4
Total : 20.5
Magus
What an amazing writer you are ! I am honestly impressed in how well you can make a reader feel tense during your posts. The moment you aged Bandit was one of the best, it really grasped me as Magus took revenge for his sight by unleashing this terrible curse on her.
Description & Clarity: 4
Voice: 4
Character: 4
Story: 4
Grammar: 4
Total : 20
Winner : Bandit With No Name
Congrats, it's well earned! Good luck in the final match!