Colosseum Discussion 3 (QFs and Beyond)

[Thaal Sinestro]

Yo, I'm only posting this for the purposes of future grading! I'm not asking for a grade change, and I shady talked to Gildarts asking if it was ok to post.

It deals with capitalization and dialogue tags, which was an aspect that was mentioned in my review:

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Note under, "Single line of dialogue, no dialogue tag," and, "Dialogue interrupted by dialogue tag," for examples of why I punctuated the sentences in the way I did.