12-14-2015, 11:27 AM
Hey there,
You're backstory is fine
A Real Knife- Take out the "Cut down people even in armor" because that will depend on your atk(Which i assume will be fine)
Spare- Making people lose their attack is a no go. Maybe word this in a different way or make it do something similar?
But Nobody Came- This should be fine but make sure you specify its a Defensive move in the title and that it prevents offensive super moves rather than all super moves.
You're backstory is fine
A Real Knife- Take out the "Cut down people even in armor" because that will depend on your atk(Which i assume will be fine)
Spare- Making people lose their attack is a no go. Maybe word this in a different way or make it do something similar?
But Nobody Came- This should be fine but make sure you specify its a Defensive move in the title and that it prevents offensive super moves rather than all super moves.
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