12-09-2015, 06:55 PM
JayKit Wrote:Terra Wolf Pack Assault- (Requires: Range Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency- Jay slams his hand onto the ground causing two wolves made from the very earth four feet from his opponents feet. These wolves are about 3 feet tall and a foot and half long. They shoot out of the ground rushing his opponent growling and snarling. The wolves try to bite and claw at any part of the opponent they can. They are controlled by both of Jays hands leaving him vulnerable and unable to use his hands to defend himself with his hands.The wolves are easily destroyed by earth crumbling strength.
If you are controlling both of these wolves, then the downsides are going to be much greater than not being able to use his hands. Even with the remote control proficiency, your character will need to stay motionless to control them fully.
Do they stay active indefinitely? what is the effective range that they can travel from Jay before the move dissipates? How long does it take for the wolves to be created?
When you say that they are easily destroyed by earth crumbling strength... does that mean that they can't be destroyed by someone who doesn't have a high enough strength stat? If so, then you're going to have to change that part.
with moves like this, it is a good Idea to state how many hits they can take before being destroyed, rather than how strong the hits have to be to destroy them.