Story and Idea Polishing

[Corporal Light]

Update!

I am happy to report I have made some progress for the storyline, most important of which is that I have fleshed out the main antagonist by giving him characteristics, motivations, likes, dislikes, and a power that will be of importance within the story (which I do not plan to have it suddenly appear out of nowhere. I'll have him use it multiple times to show he is willing to use it and HAS used it.)

I have also gotten the summary for the first post of the storyline, with the setting, characters, and outcome all outline.

However, there is one thing I would like to discuss, and that is the following.

Should the bandit group be Empire sympathizers, or bandits with a really fucked up perception of Camelot patriotism? Personally, I like the latter the most, as it isn't so much of a cliche as the former, but I'd like to hear other opinions.