Official Move Approval III

[Gilgamesh]

Ash wrote:
Lightening Lure - 300 OM
Requires Ranged Proficiency
Ash picks out a target within 15 feet of her, and then creates a magical electric current that pulls the singled towards her. The current that surrounds her is harmless, and can only be seen by the random sparks of blue lightening that moves around her clock-wise. Lightening Lure does no damage to Ash or the victim she is pulling towards her. It is simply used to close the distance between her and another person who seems bent on keeping their distance.


Can people still move or attack while in this current or does the lightning prevent them from doing so?

Its just a quick pull to bring them within arm's reach, so as soon as they are moved they can do whatever they would normally. During the yank? I guess if you can make a reaction within the few seconds it takes for her to pull. Which would make sense if the person notices she sparks up and suddenly people are being pulled towards her.

Its only meant to grab and pull.

Alright cool we'll just add in the time limit and a quick downside like a bit of fatigue and you should be good.

This move since it completely negates another move with need some more downsides in order to balance it.

Unburden – 300 OM (Requires Physical Strength)
Just by using his strength he is capable of breaking out of what ever strong slowing entanglement or snare he is currently under. This allows him to break out of being bound, chained, or even grappled as he uses this technique to escape those situations, but takes a bit more energy than normal to do and can only be used once every other round/post.

Will this work or will it have to be a bit more on the downside cost?

It would need more downsides than that since it almost negates an enemy move rather than an "every other" deal. If you change it to be more fatiguing I think it would be balanced enough.