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Move Creation Workshop
(10-23-2017, 02:55 AM)Ebonywood Hellscythe Wrote: @Koola:

Death Saucer:
>How big is the disk
>Does summoning it require his concentration? So can he use other moves at the same time?
>Will damage disrupt this?
>Does controlling it require him to concentrate on it, or does he just have to look at it?
>Can he use other moves while controlling it, what about while letting it travel in a straight line?
>How quickly can the disk turn? (A rough turning radius is good enough)

Imprisonment Ball:

>This doesn't need area attack. Area attack is generally for splash damage. Since this is just you immobilising one person.
>While immobilised, does it restrict abilities of the opponent that don't require them to move? Maybe someone can shoot lasers from their eyes and happened to be looking at you, or maybe someone can summon rocks above enemies, would this stop them doing that? Or does it only restrict them physically?
>Twenty seconds is a while. I'd add a way for opponent to break out earlier if their ATK is higher than yours and they struggle.
>How fast and far does the orb travel once hit?

I thought I had everything and there's a bunch of stuff I didn't consider! Thanks. I updated it according to your feedback.

Couple of notes on the Imprisonment Ball:
- I had Area Attack because of the explosion once the ball hits something else.
- I think the twenty seconds is fair because it also prevents Koola from doing anything during that time (other than the two second window for him to attack the orb directly). It can also be interrupted by someone else attacking Koola and he wouldn't be able to stop that, so I think the downsides are OK.

Death Saucer (300) (Requires Ranged, Remote Control Prof) - Koola lifts an open palm upward and creates a spinning disc of magenta energy with a deep red core with a 75cm diameter, taking about two seconds where he must remain still (though it can be summoned while falling) and he cannot perform any other attacks; taking damage will interrupt the charge. The edge of the disc is sharp and will cut through almost anything (depending on Koola's ATK stat to his target's durability/DEF stat for a Prime). Koola throws the disc, where it travels at the speed of an arrow and moves in a straight line. After loosing it, Koola can redirect the disc's path with a curt hand gesture if he so chooses (eg. flinging his hand left to right across his chest to make it turn right). Koola must maintain eye contact with and concentrate on the Death Saucer in order to redirect it (however he can attack after throwing it if he isn't redirecting it), and his control over it vanishes after a hundred and fifty metres. The Death Saucer will continue on until it collides with an object of sufficient mass to stop it (eg. the ground). Koola can summon four of these in a five minute period without tiring.

Imprisonment Ball (300) (Requires Area Attack, Telekinesis) - Koola throws out an open hand and fires a two-metre ring of orange energy at the speed of an arrow after a charge of three seconds. The ring dissipates after five metres so Koola has to be close. When the ring makes contact, it encircles the target in an orange orb of energy and completely immobilises them, preventing them from moving or attacking. Koola must continue channelling his energy to maintain the prison, and can hold it for as long as twenty seconds before he loses his grip. As long as Koola doesn't allow twenty seconds to pass, he can drop his focus and attack the orb, sending it flying in the direction of his hit at the speed of an arrow and causing it to explode with the first surface that isn't Koola. He has a window of two seconds to hit the orb after he stops channelling, otherwise the orb will dissipate. Koola must remain still while charging, firing and channelling, and taking damage during any phase will disrupt the attack. Due to the technique's drawbacks, outside of channelling the orb, Koola does not get very fatigued from multiple uses; however holding a target for its full duration three times in succession (up to a minute) will tire him.


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