11-11-2015, 05:29 AM
Hi and welcome to our humble abode!
Couple of things:
1) I don't believe this is your intent, but I need to clarify that using armor as your character's body will not allow you any sort of advantage over those made of flesh. You'll die in the same fashion as any other prime if wear comes to worse. (It's a cool story idea tho!)
2) In your history, we are going to require that you elaborate on the events that transpire just before Phalanx is whisked away and brought to the Omniverse. Flesh it out so that we know what was going on in his story before being brought here.
3) For your Shield Move, you are fine to have it as both an offensive and defensive move, and you have priced it correctly at 600 OM, but how large is the shield? If it is intended to deflect or shield any area larger than a few meters, you are going to need the Area Shield Prof.
Let us know and we will further you along in the process! We eagerly await to read your adventures! ^_^
Couple of things:
1) I don't believe this is your intent, but I need to clarify that using armor as your character's body will not allow you any sort of advantage over those made of flesh. You'll die in the same fashion as any other prime if wear comes to worse. (It's a cool story idea tho!)
2) In your history, we are going to require that you elaborate on the events that transpire just before Phalanx is whisked away and brought to the Omniverse. Flesh it out so that we know what was going on in his story before being brought here.
3) For your Shield Move, you are fine to have it as both an offensive and defensive move, and you have priced it correctly at 600 OM, but how large is the shield? If it is intended to deflect or shield any area larger than a few meters, you are going to need the Area Shield Prof.
Let us know and we will further you along in the process! We eagerly await to read your adventures! ^_^
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