11-04-2015, 12:24 AM
First of all, I like playing Moba's DOTA, not so much. I'm more of a league guy. But I do enjoy the fact that I now get to make sure a MOBA character is balanced. 
History - Okay great, we know 'When' he came to the Omniverse, but we need a little more. Obviously Omni pulled him from his own usniverse, that you can't change, but what was he doing at the time he came to the Omniverse?
Appearnace - You have the spoiler that contains an image, but it's handy to list his height and other similar qualities. Obviously, since it's not an original, you don't have to write paragraphs on what he looks like, but just a list of the basics will help.
Staff of the Magus - This move is, essentially, two in one. And what I mean by this is, the staff itself should be it's own move and the bolts of energy you can shoot from it should be another.
The staff itself would just be 300 OM, just describe what the staff looks like how large it is etc. But this way, the staff itself is a move and you can whack people around with it (Gotta love the physical strength Proficiency).
The bolts of energy that Rubik can fire would also be their own move. That being said, you need some downsides to the actual casting, Sure you can cast the bolt instantly, but casting it consecutively will tire your character out, this needs to be mentioned.
For the charged version, this should also mention that it takes a considerable amount of energy to use. I mean, you're charging power for 10 seconds, that's going to cost more energy than just an instant cast.
As for the burning effects, you would need the debuff proficiency.
Hidden Dagger - I'm not sure why this costs 600, unless the poison aspect of the daggers is optional (Rubik can chose whether or not it effects someone). Or, if he can also use them in melee based combat, in which case, this move is appropriately priced. But, if the poison effect is optional, and he can use these daggers at range and in melee combat, the move would cost you 900OM as that is three variable effects.
Also, the Poison effect needs to be explained more (if you're keeping it in the move). Or you can just remove the parts about poison and just add them in later when you get the chance to upgrade.
Apart from all of that, it'd be nice to know the size of these daggers.
Nulling Field - Firstly, moves can not be more or less effective against different things. Your Nulling field will always be equally effective against both magical and physical based attack, well, any attack for that matter.
If you wish to put more energy into sustaining the shield, it will require Rubik's full attention, but for this, I would just say for the time it takes to cast in the first place, and the same amount of energy it takes to cast. So, two seconds of full concentration to channel more energy into the disappearing Null Field (so basically recasting it).
You also need to tell us how long it lasts (without dissipating due to taking hits), and how durable it actually is. How many hits can it take?
Why does it cost 600?
Explain what the Nulling field looks like (to those with enhanced senses and a TEC higher than Rubik's)
History - Okay great, we know 'When' he came to the Omniverse, but we need a little more. Obviously Omni pulled him from his own usniverse, that you can't change, but what was he doing at the time he came to the Omniverse?
Appearnace - You have the spoiler that contains an image, but it's handy to list his height and other similar qualities. Obviously, since it's not an original, you don't have to write paragraphs on what he looks like, but just a list of the basics will help.
Staff of the Magus - This move is, essentially, two in one. And what I mean by this is, the staff itself should be it's own move and the bolts of energy you can shoot from it should be another.
The staff itself would just be 300 OM, just describe what the staff looks like how large it is etc. But this way, the staff itself is a move and you can whack people around with it (Gotta love the physical strength Proficiency).
The bolts of energy that Rubik can fire would also be their own move. That being said, you need some downsides to the actual casting, Sure you can cast the bolt instantly, but casting it consecutively will tire your character out, this needs to be mentioned.
For the charged version, this should also mention that it takes a considerable amount of energy to use. I mean, you're charging power for 10 seconds, that's going to cost more energy than just an instant cast.
As for the burning effects, you would need the debuff proficiency.
Hidden Dagger - I'm not sure why this costs 600, unless the poison aspect of the daggers is optional (Rubik can chose whether or not it effects someone). Or, if he can also use them in melee based combat, in which case, this move is appropriately priced. But, if the poison effect is optional, and he can use these daggers at range and in melee combat, the move would cost you 900OM as that is three variable effects.
Also, the Poison effect needs to be explained more (if you're keeping it in the move). Or you can just remove the parts about poison and just add them in later when you get the chance to upgrade.
Apart from all of that, it'd be nice to know the size of these daggers.
Nulling Field - Firstly, moves can not be more or less effective against different things. Your Nulling field will always be equally effective against both magical and physical based attack, well, any attack for that matter.
If you wish to put more energy into sustaining the shield, it will require Rubik's full attention, but for this, I would just say for the time it takes to cast in the first place, and the same amount of energy it takes to cast. So, two seconds of full concentration to channel more energy into the disappearing Null Field (so basically recasting it).
You also need to tell us how long it lasts (without dissipating due to taking hits), and how durable it actually is. How many hits can it take?
Why does it cost 600?
Explain what the Nulling field looks like (to those with enhanced senses and a TEC higher than Rubik's)
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