Official Move Approval III

[Clownpiece]

I'm fixing the descriptions of some of the moves I've already bought. 
Just clarifying things that were too vague and accounting for variables I didn't have to account for earlier (mostly Sonny). The moves themselves aren't being changed in how they work at all.

Lightning Strike: Somerled channels weather magic through his arm, empowering his next punch with lightning. Channeling takes less than a second, and he can move during the charge. However, he cannot hold onto charge for any amount of time, having to release it instantly. The range is no greater than a normal punch, but it hits much faster and harder. Due to Somerled's human-like durability, actually hitting something with it hurts him too.

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Due to the extreme forces involved, hitting something also causes intense damage to his hand.

Summoned Osmium Hammer: Sonny draws upon a large amount of Somerled's power to create an osmium mallet. The handle is 5 feet long, and the head is 1 foot in diameter by 3 feet deep. The weapon is plain, completely undecorated. Somerled uses this as a weapon until Sonny unsummons it. It is an intensely slow weapon, but hits like a truck. Swinging it sideways throws Somerled way off balance, and if he misses the strike, will literally throw him several feet to the side. He is also incapable of drawing back the hammer, and instead must swing from where it rests, except when raising it above his head. Sonny becomes temporarily corporeal in order to summon or unsummon the hammer. Neither him nor Somerled can move in that time. Striking Sonny during this time frame causes his form to instantly destabilize and dissolve, using up the magic but not completing the action.

Adding Measurement:
Weight of 3,400 lbs
Description Overhaul:
Sonny draws upon a large amount of their shared power to create an osmium mallet. The handle is 5 feet long, and the head is 1 foot in diameter and 3 feet deep. This hammer weighs a massive 3,400 pounds and is completely undecorated, it's appearance entirely dull. Either of them can use this as a weapon until Sonny dispels it. It is an intensely slow weapon, but hits like a truck. The huge weight of the hammer means swinging it sideways throws the wielder way off balance, and if the strike misses entirely, with literally throw them several feet to the side. It must be swung from where it rests, as the momentum involved is too great to draw it back, except when lifted above the head.
If Somerled is the dominant half, then Sonny becomes temporarily corporeal in order to create or destroy the hammer, during which time neither of them can move. If Sonny is stricken during this time, then his form is destabilized and destroyed instantly, using up the magic and not completing the action.
If Sonny is the dominant half, then he does not need to be summoned to create the weapon. However, the full time it takes to summon the hammer remains the same, he still can not move while it is being summoned, and being stricken still cancels the spell and wastes the magic, though it doesn't dissolve his body.
And possibly (maybe not):
Adding a requirement of an Attack of 5 or greater. Unless that's no bueno.

Whiteout: Somerled focuses weather magic in an area around him. He then releases a wintry wind outwards from his body, rendering anyone chilled by it snow blind for about 5 seconds. The area affected is 10 feet in diameter. He must stand still to use it, and chargeup is around a second. Once released, Somerled can continue moving. Using winter-related magic drops his body temperature, making his movements and reaction time more sluggish, as well as decreasing fine motor control immensely. His body temperature stabilizes after a minute. This move does no damage.

Changing Metrics
10 Feet to 3 Meters

Tier 1 Super Attack: Spirit of the Sun: Somerled reallocates a massive amount of his power, allowing Sonny to become corporeal right next to him. Sonny then explodes with searing heat, which begins weakening starting about 40 feet from him, to about 170 feet where all feeling of it is gone.

Adding Sentence:
If Sonny is the dominant half, he does not need to be summoned to attack, but since he needs to be careful so as to not destroy his body, it takes the same time to charge as if Somerled was the dominant half.
And 
Changing metrics from 40 feet and 170 feet to 12 meters and 50 meters.
(It was originally supposed to be that but I converted to imperial and rounded for some stupid reason. >.<)