10-30-2015, 07:23 PM
[b]Twin Sacrificial Rebirth
Cost: 1600 Om
Requires: Remote Control Proficiency, Hive Mind, Shapeshifting
Through a series of hand seals and release of chakra, the user generates a sturdy clone of themselves within three seconds. This cost can stagger the user if used three or more times in a short period of ten seconds and even alone it is a decent investment of their stamina. Furthermore, even after this investment they cannot function in a Verse that the creator does not currently occupy physically.[/b]
You need to define "sturdy" and most likely it's going to need much, much, much, much, much bigger downsides (I'm just pre-empting a back and forth of me telling you to increase the downsides until it's finally something like thirty seconds for a remote-controlled clone that matches Ururu in strength)
There's no way you could send a clone anywhere near outside of the verse. I mean you wouldn't even be able to see them. Can Ururu see through the clone's eyes by default? This kind of thing needs to be in the description, obviously.
If Ururu gives them an order, they can do certain stuff that is 300 per use. Such as attack something. Defend something. Each will cost 300. Define those things and I will give you a cost based on 300 per, like the example in the moves page.
Everything after this point is fine, though obviously you can't have an assist until you're level 2
Cost: 1600 Om
Requires: Remote Control Proficiency, Hive Mind, Shapeshifting
Through a series of hand seals and release of chakra, the user generates a sturdy clone of themselves within three seconds. This cost can stagger the user if used three or more times in a short period of ten seconds and even alone it is a decent investment of their stamina. Furthermore, even after this investment they cannot function in a Verse that the creator does not currently occupy physically.[/b]
You need to define "sturdy" and most likely it's going to need much, much, much, much, much bigger downsides (I'm just pre-empting a back and forth of me telling you to increase the downsides until it's finally something like thirty seconds for a remote-controlled clone that matches Ururu in strength)
There's no way you could send a clone anywhere near outside of the verse. I mean you wouldn't even be able to see them. Can Ururu see through the clone's eyes by default? This kind of thing needs to be in the description, obviously.
Quote:Clones are of limited combat capability when only loaded with an alternative personality, or persona. This leaves their only usable actions as being targeted, a distraction, meat shield or authentic corpse. Otherwise they are merely a pilot of the body. The description of such clones varies in clothing and appearance based on the time spent during the creation but neither inventory load-out nor move-set is altered more than aesthetically.You need to tell me what that means. (First bolded bit).If they are an independent pilot of the body they need to be an assist.
If Ururu gives them an order, they can do certain stuff that is 300 per use. Such as attack something. Defend something. Each will cost 300. Define those things and I will give you a cost based on 300 per, like the example in the moves page.
Everything after this point is fine, though obviously you can't have an assist until you're level 2
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