10-30-2015, 06:38 PM
Omni Wrote:Would the addition of this clarifying text make it more acceptable:Thaal Sinestro Wrote:Crash Punch 300 OMThis seems a bit too powerful for just a regular but slightly more awkward punch
The nameless warrior had her arm cut off by the powerful Wizard, Gildarts. Thankfully, he had a prosthetic that just about matched, so she decided to use it.
Using Gildarts' infamous Crash Magic that remains in the artificial arm, the bandit can throw a massive (and easier to dodge) haymaker punch that can blow objects apart and deal a little bit of extra damage to living things.
If the attack hits, a white grid pattern appears from within an object before it breaks into small cubes. The total volume of the destroyed object depends on its density and how hard she swings, but the maximum is about 50 lbs.
If the punch hits a living target, a grid-pattern cut opens up along it's surface.
The fact that it's her left arm (not her dominant) makes it more awkward for her to throw big punches, so she tends to telegraph and be slightly more awkward.
"If the punch hits a living target, a grid-pattern cut opens up along it's surface. Other than the visual descriptor, it deals about as much damage as a normal haymaker from a person who can punch as hard as a bullet hits."
'Cause ATK 5.
I mainly wanted it to break STUFF more than PEOPLE.


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