10-28-2015, 08:29 AM
Sackboy Wrote:I want to send in an NPC named Whirlpool. Here are all of his moves.
Tail Whip (requires Ranged Proficiency and Physical Strength) (600)
SeaWing tails are dangerous weapons that can be used in melee combat, and creating huge waves that can travel to 10 feet.
Bioluminescence (0) (fodder)
SeaWings have patches all over their body that light up at their whim. Useful for helping Primes and Secondaries without Enhanced Senses.
Talons (300) (requires Physical Strength)
Whirlpool uses his talons to claw at his foe. If they hit someone with DEF 3 or lower, they have the same force as a blow with a sword. If they hit someone with DEF 4 or lower, they only leave minor scratches.
Underwater Survival (0) (fodder)
Whirlpool uses the gills on his neck to breathe underwater. He cannot talk underwater unless he uses the bioluminescent language which is like Morse Code: Aquatic. Unfortunatly, no one knows Aquatic in the Omniverse. It takes five years to learn.
Don't need to address the fodder stuff
Tail Whip - how long is the tail? How large are the waves it can produce? How far can the waves travel?
Talons - Unfortunately, specifying effects based on stats doesn't work like that. Your talons, as a move, would do more or less damage the higher/ lower a person's DEF stat is. if it's 1, the talons will do more damage than if their defense is 2.
How large are the talons? what do they look like?

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