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Move Creation Workshop
Kakashi Hatake Wrote:
Black Mage Wrote:Gate - (Ranged, Ranged Materialize, Time Manipulation)

The Black Mage creates a .15m radius portal or "gate" though which he can send an non-living object, after which the gate dissipates immediately. Once in the gate the object travels forward 10 seconds in time, coming through another gate summoned by the Black mage. If the Black Mage cannot summon a new gate in the next ten seconds a sort of magical feedback loop occurs, causing a magical "shock" to damage the Black Mage based on the size and speed of object being put into the portal(with Omniphysics dictating that slower and larger objects cause more damage).

In my opinion this should be fine as it's more or less a juiced up deflection/dodge. Depending on what you're sucking in, it would require more concentration/fatigue (a baseball would be negligible, an ICBM would be a lot) You may want to stipulate that Black Mage's and his opponent's SPD and TEC would come into play to determine if he's fast or accurate enough to not botch the maneuver (kinda implied, but it's always nice to state it outright). I am however concerned with if you stole a weapon and tossed it into the portal, choosing not to open another and suffer the penalty instead. I think 'eating' another move in this way MIGHT be a problem as it forces players to re-summon an entire move in some cases. In the case of Vincent's Cerberus, it would disable 4 moves. Not sure if that's your intent, but that's the only problem I can think of with it right now. If you do want to go that route, you'd need Debuff and probably an energy cost scaling to the power of the move.

Sorry if that was a wall of text =P. Just trying to cover everything.
Disarming people wasn't really my intent. Let's try this instead.

Gate - (Ranged, Ranged Materialize,Time Manipulation)

The Black Mage creates a .15m radius portal or "gate" though which he can send a(that is, one) non-living object, after which the gate dissipates immediately. Once in the gate the object travels forward 10 seconds in time, coming through another gate summoned by the Black Mage. While a good way to effectively re-direct an attack, this transportation is not without cost. Throwing an object through time is taxing, causing the Black Mage more fatigue based on the energy inherent in the object. Furthermore should he be unable to create an exit gate in ten seconds he will experience a sort of magical feedback loop, causing a painful shock to course through the Black Mage's body, and the object will spontaneously appear where the Black Mage put the initial gate.
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