Tom Riddle

[Minato Namikaze]

Verbalized magic is more powerful, taking around a second total of time

This would be where you substitute your charge time into, not at the end of the move's description.

Within the first three seconds the wounds inflicted with the taint will rot away all flesh within a centimeter’s distance before slowing to another three centimeters over seventeen seconds. The amount of taint that infects a wound is proportional to that injury’s initial size and shape. Furthermore once an injury is initiated any subsequent injuries from Dark Magic revert back to the Evocative Curse base until the taint has completed its cycle of infection and rotting of 10 seconds or until stymied by regeneration or healing of some sort.

What I have put in bold is the part about this move that Is still too powerful. You can't just rot away all the flesh within a one centimeter area on a person's body. You may not think so, but a hole going through someone's arm is a lot more devastating than it seems. I also said that this should slowly eat away at flesh, not quickly enough that it eats through all of the flesh within that area. Otherwise this is just a move that allows you to put holes in people.

This is a link to a move where I was giving Zack Ideas on Bio Materia ideas. One of them has an effect that eats away at flesh.