Official Move Approval III

[Jaixe Furiael]

I wrote that out of habit... Also to balance the telekinesis part on my own, I described it as taking a low-level concentration, but I can, and probably should, up that. I should also write in the dropout effect that the range has with the telekinesis power. Would modifying it to allow low-power, low-cost moves like the Energy Storm be viable?

I can make this compromise, but, like you said, only for VERY simple, absent minded moves. *Approve Jutsu*
:accepted:

So just to make sure, this is the revised version of that part of the move. Tell me if it is acceptable as is.
[spoiler]To add to Jaixe’s combat prowess when wielding this weapon, Jaixe may also control it via thought, permitting its use at a range and strength dependent on his telekinesis power. However, it requires a medium level of focus and the target being within view for Jaixe to react properly. Obscuring his vision or sufficiently breaking his concentration will therefore hamper or negate the advantages of this ability. If Jaixe’s concentration is completely broken, the scythe will fall uselessly to the ground regardless of what it was doing prior to such. It should be noted that Jaixe can transfer from wielding the scythe physically to mental control in close-quarters combat with speed and skill that is dependent on TEC. While using the scythe telekinetically, Jaixe may move or use low-concentration moves. If this scythe is destroyed, it will take six seconds, a three second cool down, and a three second summoning time, to reconstruct it.[/spoiler]