Official Move Approval III

[Sasuke Uchiha]

Glad to see that Super Sonic Punch got approved. How's this for Static Touch?

Static Touch - 300 OM, requires Melee Attack Proficiency
Barry runs around the opponent for 3 seconds, charging electricity. When he's done, he walks up to the opponent, pauses for a second, and touches them, electrocuting them. The attack isn't very powerful - it's less effective than actually just punching him - but it should come in handy in a pinch.

I could approve this for you, as is, but I'm not so sure I want to do that. Having a move that is no more effective than punches you can already throw with the Physical Prof seems like a waste of 300 OM to me. Again, I can approve this as is for you, but, can I make a suggestion?

I'd feel far more comfortable approving this if, say, you had the Debuff prof and added a stun effect to the move. Your opponent would be stunned for a couple of seconds, giving the move more value, and I could sleep better at night knowing you didn't waste 300 OM. How does that sound? Again, if you truly want it as is, you can have it. Let us know.

Terminus Verge - 900 OM (Requires Physical Strength, Ranged, Remote Control Proficiencies, & Telekinesis)

Appearance:
[spoiler]Jaixe’s primary weapon, the Terminus Verge is a scythe with two separated blades shooting forward with a shallow curve, and adorned with pulsing, glowing red lines of energy that shift violently over the black, opaque metal that seems to draw in the surrounding light. It has several spikes and jagged curves towards the back of the scythe blade, adding to the overall weapon’s chaotic and lethal appearance. The handle is of a simple, but durable metal colored black with bands of silver at the top and bottom, where it ends in a point. The blade connects directly to the handle, but has two monochromatic spikes curling downward over the silver band that connects to it. The scythe overall is fairly lightweight, and in Jaixe’s hands, it moves in impossible ways, and as though it were a blur of motion usually ending in the opponent’s demise.[/spoiler]

Features:
The scythe takes three seconds to conjure with a medium level of concentration, allowing some movement. The Verge is a scythe that, while being able to be wielded normally as one expects, may also be charged for two seconds to release a wave of energy when swung or simply aimed. This move requires a mild energy cost and a medium degree of focus, allowing movement at a walking pace but nothing else. The wave is one foot long and curved along the same path that the scythe’s blade was. It does not track or curve and continues forward, slicing the first object or victim it comes into contact with before dissipating. The wave travels at roughly the same speed as a bullet, though it produces a loud shrieking noise when charged and fired, being useless for stealth and allowing the target a split moment to react to it.

To add to Jaixe’s combat prowess when wielding this weapon, Jaixe may also control it via thought, permitting its use at a range dependent on his telekinesis power, though still retaining the same lethal skill and speed as he would have wielding it physically. However, it requires a low level of focus (slightly higher if charging a wave attack) and the target being within view for Jaixe to react properly. Obscuring his vision or sufficiently breaking his concentration will therefore hamper the advantages of this ability. If Jaixe’s concentration is completely broken, the scythe will fall uselessly to the ground regardless of what it was doing prior to such. It should be noted that Jaixe can transfer from wielding the scythe physically to mental control in close-quarters combat with speed and skill that is dependent on TEC. Furthermore, while wielding this scythe in either state, Jaixe may still use other moves in tandem with this one. If this scythe is destroyed, it will take six seconds, a three second cool down, and a three second summoning time, to reconstruct it.

See the bolded there? Gonna have so that's a no go. Controlling the weapon through your telekinesis is going to take concentration. Concentration that you wouldn't be able to keep while performing other moves. Now, you are perfectly fine to allow the blade to fall and continue your telekinesis once you have finished executing other moves, but you can't do it simultaneously. Otherwise, unless overruled, this move can be approved at 900 with this slight edit.