10-20-2015, 02:08 PM
Kakashi Hatake Wrote:Jaixe Furiael Wrote:Answer’s Verge - 900 OM (Requires Physical Strength, Ranged, & Remote Control Proficiencies)
Appearance:
[spoiler]Jaixe’s primary weapon, the Answer’s Verge is a scythe with two separated blades shooting forward with a shallow curve, and adorned with pulsing, glowing red lines of energy that shift violently over the black, opaque metal that seems to draw in the surrounding light. It has several spikes and jagged curves towards the back of the scythe blade, adding to the overall weapon’s chaotic and lethal appearance. The handle is of a simple, but durable metal colored black with bands of silver at the top and bottom, where it ends in a point. The blade connects directly to the handle, but has two monochromatic spikes curling downward over the silver band that connects to it. The scythe overall is fairly lightweight, and in Jaixe’s hands, it moves in impossible ways, and as though it were a blur of motion usually ending in the opponent’s demise.[/spoiler]
Features:
[spoiler]The scythe takes three seconds to conjure with a medium level of concentration, allowing some movement. The Verge is a scythe that, while being able to be wielded normally as one expects, may also be charged for a split second to release a wave of energy when swung or simply aimed. The wave is one foot long and only a few centimeters in width, having a sharp edge to it. It is curved, similarly to the blade of the scythe it was launched from. It does not track or swerve and continues forward, slicing the first object or victim it comes into contact with before dissipating. The wave travels at roughly the same speed as a bullet, though it produces a loud shrieking noise when charged and fired, being useless for stealth and allowing the target a split moment to react to it.
To add to Jaixe’s combat prowess when wielding this weapon, Jaixe may also control it via thought, permitting its use at a range of up to ten meters from himself with the same lethal skill and speed as he would have wielding it physically. However, it requires a low level of focus (slightly higher if charging a wave attack) and the target being within view for Jaixe to react properly. Obscuring his vision or sufficiently breaking his concentration will therefore hamper the advantages of this ability. If Jaixe’s concentration is completely broken, the scythe will fall uselessly to the ground regardless of what it was doing prior to such. It should be noted that Jaixe can transfer from wielding the scythe physically to mental control in close-quarters combat, dependent on TEC. Furthermore, while wielding this scythe in either state, Jaixe may still use other moves in tandem with this one. If this scythe is destroyed, it will take six seconds, a three second cool down, and a three second summoning time, to reconstruct it.[/spoiler]
This looks fine with one note. With the charge time being so minute and the speed so fast, expect the charge blasts to do a small amount of damage (like not a lot more than a normal attack). If you're looking for a stronger attack, you'll need a longer charge or some other kind of downside to compensate. Oh, and you will need telepathy to control the weapon hands-free.
You mean telekinesis, yes? Telepathy wouldn't make much sense...
And the charge blasts were meant to be quick-fired, so high-damage isn't really necessary in this context. It's more of a way to make it equally useful at a range and at close-quarters combat. It's the speed and technique that matters most when using this weapon, especially since its two features can easily be chained when using it. Though I could upgrade it later to include a longer charging attack.

