10-17-2015, 07:47 AM
Horcrux Binding - This isn't allowed.
Wand, Yew and Phoenix Feather 13-1/2“ - Does the wand do anything other than act as a medium for Tom's spells? Can it use attacks on its own without use of spells?
Non-verbal Casting [Frusto] - What sort of projectiles? Magical Energy, small blade like projectiles? etc. how often can this be used, how much energy does it use, how fast do the projectiles travel? how many projectiles at once?
Verbal Casting [Lacero] - What sort of effect? fire, explosions? etc. how often can this be used, how much energy is used, how fast do the projectiles travel?
Charged Casting [Magnus Totum Lacerovisis] - 10 meters is a bit too large of a radius, How fast is this beam? how much energy does it take to use? How long does it take to charge?
Augmentation Definitions - So each spell can be upgraded with one of 3 effects (Corruption, Poisoning and corrosion)? And on top of that, if the spell misses and hits a tree and corrupts a part of that tree, and if the bark from that tree flies off and makes contact with something else (say your target) it will transfer the effect to the target?
Memory Charm Obliviate - This move, as it is, is way too powerful. This needs to have a hard in character time limit. On how it lasts and how often it can be used on a single opponent. As for how long the effect lasts, I would say no longer than 20 - 30 seconds, and even then, that's probably stretching it a little bit. As for how long Tom would have to wait for using it on the same person another time, I would say at least 2 days.
On top of all that you would also need Telepathy for this move, and it's effectiveness would work based off of TEC differences as per the telepathy rules. With double another person's TEC this move would work to it's maximum effect. The closer they are to your TEC, the harder it will be to influence someone with this move. and if they have double your own TEC, it will effect them for only a fraction of the entire time.
Horcrux Body - It is being used as a physical representation for Tom's body. All damage it takes should be reflected on the actual body itself. Otherwise this could just be used as a way to mitigate damage that you should be taking.
Wand, Yew and Phoenix Feather 13-1/2“ - Does the wand do anything other than act as a medium for Tom's spells? Can it use attacks on its own without use of spells?
Non-verbal Casting [Frusto] - What sort of projectiles? Magical Energy, small blade like projectiles? etc. how often can this be used, how much energy does it use, how fast do the projectiles travel? how many projectiles at once?
Verbal Casting [Lacero] - What sort of effect? fire, explosions? etc. how often can this be used, how much energy is used, how fast do the projectiles travel?
Charged Casting [Magnus Totum Lacerovisis] - 10 meters is a bit too large of a radius, How fast is this beam? how much energy does it take to use? How long does it take to charge?
Augmentation Definitions - So each spell can be upgraded with one of 3 effects (Corruption, Poisoning and corrosion)? And on top of that, if the spell misses and hits a tree and corrupts a part of that tree, and if the bark from that tree flies off and makes contact with something else (say your target) it will transfer the effect to the target?
Memory Charm Obliviate - This move, as it is, is way too powerful. This needs to have a hard in character time limit. On how it lasts and how often it can be used on a single opponent. As for how long the effect lasts, I would say no longer than 20 - 30 seconds, and even then, that's probably stretching it a little bit. As for how long Tom would have to wait for using it on the same person another time, I would say at least 2 days.
On top of all that you would also need Telepathy for this move, and it's effectiveness would work based off of TEC differences as per the telepathy rules. With double another person's TEC this move would work to it's maximum effect. The closer they are to your TEC, the harder it will be to influence someone with this move. and if they have double your own TEC, it will effect them for only a fraction of the entire time.
Horcrux Body - It is being used as a physical representation for Tom's body. All damage it takes should be reflected on the actual body itself. Otherwise this could just be used as a way to mitigate damage that you should be taking.
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