Official Move Approval III

[Roger Smith]

Rin Okumura wrote:
Satan Bomb - Homing Proficiency (300 OM): Rin stabs Kurikara into the ground, allowing him to cause a series of blue explosions in places of his choosing. The maximum amount of explosions he can create with one move is 5, and for each explosion he makes, the move drains even more of his stamina. This attack leaves him open for attack, as he needs to keep his blade in the ground in order to create the explosions, and it is also very draining to use. One explosion only causes burning, and any other damage done to an enemy would be from whatever shrapnel comes with it.


Well, I already bought homing proficiency and wouldn't have enough OM to buy that move if I sold it back. So I'm just gonna make a different move with the same name!

Satan Bomb - Homing Proficiency (300 OM): Rin creates a blue ball of fire and throws it at his enemy, leaving his hand held out and concentrating so that the orb will track down it's target. This move requires a large amount of concentration, leaving the user open for attack. If concentration is broken, then the orb will stop tracking the target and dissipate. If the orb connects with it's target, then it will explode, causing damage to the enemy.

Lookin' mostly good, just a few detail-things:
-- How long does it take to create the ball of flame?
-- How quickly does it move while it's tracking down its target?
-- Assuming Rin doesn't get hit and can keep his focus, how long can he maintain the attack before it dissipates, or will it dissipate on its own at all?
-- How large is the explosion when the orb connects?

It'll take two seconds to create the orb, moves 4 mph, lasts for 10 seconds before dissipating, and is only large enough to affect one person (until I get enough OM to make it an area attack.) I'll include those details into the description of my roster if they work.

I would just like to point out that 4 mph is slightly faster than an average walking pace, so even someone with 1 SPD would be able to stay out of its reach quite easily.

But with those additions to the description, it is approved, either way.