10-14-2015, 03:35 PM
Aeris Wrote:I should probably clarify - I meant that Omni would give Aeris a body before the introductory scene, so it would not interfere with said scene.
To explain in a timeline: Omni "takes" Aeris from her home universe => he gives her a body => the introductory scene happens => Aeris wakes up at the fountain. I know that Omni's introductory post is sacred :omni:
I'll also edit the move to clarify the shards. I'll add the following: "One shard is about 7,5 by 3.3 inches, or 19 by 8,4 cm. That's around the size of a human hand from side to side and from wrist to tip of the middle finger."
What I am telling you, is that, you may not indicate that Omni gave you a body. You can only assume that he did. No where in any story you write should you ever 'prove' that Omni gave you the body. Just have your character assume he did and go on about your business. Is this fine with you?
Edit: Heck, you could even venture to the Oververse(provided you meet the writing requirements) in order to confirm whether or not he provided you the body. Could make it an overall goal with you character, because truth be told, no one but Omni would know how you acquired your body. Make sense?
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