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Official Move Approval III
Autumn Ellise Rose Wrote:The Guitar: Aqua Rose (900) - requires ranged, Area attack, homing and debuff

Autumn summons her guitar to use as her primary weapon. The soundwaves emitted from the instrument can send enemies flying back to give herself space and possiblly slam them into a wall forcefully. To acquire such effect, Autumn must play a series of chords that take about 3 seconds to play. The sound wave is projected in a semi-circle in front of Autumn, where it is more powerful if used when the target directly ahead of her, and less effective if the enemy happens to be beside her.It can also be used by pointing the head stock at an enemy and projecting elemental attacks(such as flames and lightning) with her strums. Miraculously, the guitar doesn't need an amplifier to function with electric sound like in the human world. The range of the guitars sound waves and attacks are both 150 feet, and the sound waves travel, of course, at the speed of sound. However, the sound wave can only send an enemy back 10-30feet depending on the characters weight. Summons within a second.

Soundwave 300OM (Comes with guitar, just as a sword come with a blade) -requires ranged, Area Attack, homing and debuff

Preformed from power chords played on Autumn's guitar, this attack is purely tactical. It can be used to push an enemy back to give her space for her ranged attacks, and if combined well with her environment, it can be used to set up terrifying attack combos.

Pyrotechnics & Lightshow (600)- requires range, and Area attack

Autumn's main offense attacks. By stumming low leveled notes, The Aqua Rose can spew fire in a cone out of the head stock that can reach 10 feet in front of her area of fire. The cone of fires width of the circle at the end of the cone is 5 feet in diameter. By stumming high leveled notes she can unleash lightning bolts from Aqua Rose's head stock for fast shock attacks. These can reach up to 54 meters before they disperse and fly as fast as a bullet. Both must be stummed at least 10 notes before activation(2 seconds at Autumns ability.) So lightning bolts can only be fired every 2 seconds, longer if she is moving.

I was told my guitar move was approved with fault. Without proper addition of what exactly happens with the fire and lightning attacks I skipped a variable effect. This means Aqua rose must be reapproved.


Please excuse my impatient nature but it seems my move may have been passed up. I see the moves after mine getting approved, but not mine. If I missed this approval, sorry to habe caused trouble.
"I've been neglected, harassed, beaten, and diminished all my life. What motivates me to continue? The glory of proving people wrong. Being worth more than the numbing existence offered me. To be a hero." - Amber


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