Official Move Approval III

[Retane]

T1 Super Move(600 OM SP:1): Dark Reckoning( A Thousand Lashes; Torment of a Thousand Souls)- At one time, being the God of Death, even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious is still linked to the dark planes. The Emerald Fiend reaches out to a hidden plane, where many souls suffer in torture and agony. He raises his hands to the sky, forcing a rip in time and space. From the tear above, a mass of dark purple energy begins to form. Screams of pain howl throughout rthe air only to be encased in the large orb as a fury of razor shap wind revolved around the the dark energy. When the moment is right, the orb launches at his target. Upon collision, the wind attempts to shred at anything in it's way, making a path for the Orb of Reckoning. As the dark energy hits it's target, it tries to onsume them physically and mentally. The target hears the cries of anguish of a thousand souls and is forced to see the pain and agony one unlucky soul had to feel...

Sounds perplexing and not enjoyable in the slightest. Can we make a slight compromise?

This:

even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious is still linked to the dark planes.

To this:

even if he can't remember, Retane's subconscious believes itself still linked to the dark planes.

Omni doesn't allow for his chosen to have any link to their worlds from before they were brought to the Omniverse. Make this edit and your off like a prom dress.

Also, I approve the alterations you have made for your assists Mark of Lythia. 0 OM, update it.

No. i wont bend for you,

How is this?

T1 Super Move(600 OM SP:1): Dark Reckoning( A Thousand Lashes; Torment of a Thousand Souls)- At one time, Retane was the God of Death. Retane once created a plane to hold their torment. He subconsciously has done so again. The Emerald Fiend reaches out to a hidden plane, where many souls suffer in torture and agony. He raises his hands to the sky, forcing a rip in time and space. From the tear above, a mass of dark purple energy begins to form. Screams of pain howl throughout the air only to be encased in the large orb as a fury of razor sharp wind revolved around the the dark energy. When the moment is right, the orb launches at his target. Upon collision, the wind attempts to shred at anything in it's way, making a path for the Orb of Reckoning. As the dark energy hits it's target, it tries to consume them physically and mentally. The target hears the cries of anguish of a thousand souls and is forced to see the pain and agony one unlucky soul had to feel...