Sasuke's Alt: Ms Marvel

[Ms. Marvel]

So, I am having trouble getting Ms. Marvel off the ground, and I think it's because of the history I chose, so I'd like to make some edits.

Keep everything except this:

Ms. Marvel decided to become pro-registration, out of loyalty to the U.S. government and also to her longtime friend Iron Man, who had offered to lead the pro-registration forces. This puts her at odds with heroes such as Captain America and Spider-Man and during a mission to hunt down Anti-registration heroes, Ms Marvel is suddenly transported to the Omniverse.

and change to this:

Ms. Marvel decided to become pro-registration, out of loyalty to the U.S. government and also to her longtime friend Iron Man, who had offered to lead the pro-registration forces. This puts her at odds with heroes such as Captain America and Spider-Man and during a mission to hunt down Anti-registration heroes, Ms Marvel begins to question her choices.

Things turn sour for the anti-registration and they lose the war, along with some of earth's greatest with it. Unfortunately, the forces behind the pro-registration are manipulative and they slowly began to use heroes to enforce tyranny. Another Civil war breaks out and this time Ms. Marvel fight against the pro-registration, however, too much damage had been dealt and they lose again.

The world becomes enslaved and the heroes left too weak to resist it. As a key player in the downfall of their once great society, Danvers falls apart. It is at this time that Omni decides she interest him...

Is this cool?