Official Move Approval III

[Roger Smith]

Now you see me...(Tier 1 super move, requires Physical Strength, Stealth, Debuff) 600 OM
Victor uses his belt to turn invisible and stay out of harms way whilst channeling energy into his blades casing the golden blade to burn with red energy and the silver to glow with a blue aura he slashes at an unsuspecting enemy with the daggers causing a blast of energy to hurt what ever comes into contact with the blades ,used to damage weak points or knock enemy's away or down. this leaves what ever limb or body part is targeted weaker for the next post. With arms weakening attacks and legs slowing movement

hope that explained it better

also now I have this one


Blade Spin( physical strength, Area Attack, not sure if I need ranged(if so I will buy it)300 OM I think: Victor Wolfe attaches his daggers to small chains inside his selves, and spins casing the area around him to be sliced at giving his blades the reach of about six feet in each direction , due to lack of force the blades will not do as large amount of damage as if they where thrust by a hand, but can still deal damage to people with light or no Armour, as it is just a spin there is almost know control with Wolfe only being able to start and stop due to his high speed and good reflexes. the weaknesses are that it is relatively weak only dealing glancing blows against most enemies and can cause Wolfe to get disorientated if used for to long lowering his tech temporarily.

Now you see me.... -- Much better. Only one more thing: the duration should be an actual time, as dependant on the number of writers involved and such as well as the writing style, one post might only be a few seconds, or several minutes. I'd say around a minute or two would be alright, since it's a Super Attack.

Blade Spin -- This looks good. Since the reach of the attack is only 6 feet you won't need Ranged. Only thing I can think of is a defined limit of how long Wolfe can spin for before he starts to get disorientated. And one other quick question: does he stay stationary and spin in place, or can he move while spinning, kind of like a top?