Official Move Approval III

[Roger Smith]

Need a fodder power approved for Ururu's own brand of creating secondaries.

Black Star Anchor
Cost: 0 Om
Requires: Fodder; Hive Mind; Communicator
With a set of hand seals, Ururu channels chakra and a dollop of omnilium in her hand to conjure an Obsidian chakra crystal shaped into jewelry. Upon attaching it to a desired clone, its connection to the Network is radically altered causing it to evolve into a Secondary while severing Ururu’s ability to directly control or possess it. This leaves only a Persona capable of piloting the body. Furthermore Ururu may only affect it through communication, dismissing it, or replacing/removing the Persona entirely, otherwise it is entirely independent and able to transverse to new locations and other Verses.

I want to say that this is just fodder and not a problem....but there's something about it I can't quite put my finger on that I'm not entirely sure about. I'll....let someone else take a second look at this one.

Arai Hotoke (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Debuff Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) 300 OM

Kopaka activates his elemental control of Ice and summons a whirling blizzard of blinding white snow within a thirty meter radius of himself that does not move once it is called. The attack does not cause any specific damage (other than a nasty chill), but it effectively veils anything farther than three feet away within the storm. Individuals located outside of the storm cannot see into it. The blizzard lasts until Kopaka's next turn. Fighters with Enhanced Senses can sense through the blizzard, and therefore negate the attack. For Kopaka, this means that he must have his Kanohi Akaku activated; otherwise he will be blinded by his own move. This effectively prevents him from using other Mask powers while inside the blizzard.

Takato Wairua (Requires Ranged Proficiency, Ranged Materialize Proficiency, Remote Control Proficiency) 300 OM

Kopaka calls upon the Kanohi Mahiki, the Mask of Illusion, and create two illusory copies of himself that can move and fight separately from Kopaka. Obviously, these illusions are completely intangible, and are therefore harmless and unable to be harmed. Controlling the copies takes some mental effort of Kopaka's part, so the Toa must keep his attacks simple and straightforward while the copies are active. The Illusion lasts until Kopaka hits the opponent with an attack, or, when the opponent hits Kopaka with a direct attack (Area attacks do not break the illusion). Opponents with Enhanced Senses can detect Kopaka's true location, and fighters with high TEC might be able to distinguish Kopaka's true location with some observation as well.

Arai Hotoke -- Clarification is necessary: is the blizzard summoned at a central location that can be anywhere within 30 meters from Kopaka, or is it centered on himself when summoned and covers a 30-meter radius? If the former, how large an area does the blizzard cover? Another thing to take note of, how long does it take to summon the blizzard into existence? And an actual measurement of time would be preferred -- depending on writing styles and participants involved, one turn could be a few seconds or a few minutes, y'know.

Takato Wairua -- How long does it take to create these two illusory clones? Also, just assuming this, but area of effect attacks won't break the illusion, but what about of someone should try to land a hit and it strikes one of the illusions? The illusion remains, but they just know "damn, that wasn't the real one i guess", or does that particular clone vanish? And one other thing; assuming by some magic of combat being intense, neither Kopaka nor his opponent manage to land a blow any time soon, how long would the illusion last under those circumstances?

Now you see me...(Tier 1 super move, requires Physical Strength, Stealth, Debuff) 600 OM
Victor uses his belt to turn invisible and stay out of harms way whilst channeling energy into his blades casing the golden blade to burn with red energy and the silver to glow with a blue aura he slashes at an unsuspecting enemy with the daggers causing a blast of energy to hurt what ever comes into contact with the blades ,used to damage weak points or knock enemy's away or down.

Just for clarity, what is the Debuff part of this move for? I assume it's for the part about damaging an enemy's weak points, but what effect does it have, exactly? and for that matter, how long does it last?