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Official Move Approval III
Minato Namikaze Wrote:1 - Two seconds is fine, no debuffs, wording is fine - approved at 300 Edit: Make sure to include the changes in the description of the move

2 - Write up Your supermove with it's new name and any changes you want, then I'll look it over again for you Smile

Submitted with requested changes for the record.

Consume Essence (Physical Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) (300)

The very ability that made Darth Zulenka the vicious war criminal everyone feared. The Sith Mistress could feed on the very fear and power that made every opponent who they were. However having being ripped from an alternate time line Consume Essence has been considerably weakened. Instead of outright melting the target into a puddle of red liquid the effects have been drastically reduced. The users eyes glow red like that of a dying star. Grasping the target by the throat the user electrifies their hand with black force-lightning that electrocutes the victim over a period of two seconds. This ability is only effective in close combat and is not normally lethal, but can be used to finish off mortally wounded foes.

Essence Purge (Physical Proficiency, Area Attack Proficiency) (600) Tier 1 Super Move

In the prime of her power just before being called into the Omniverse, Darth Zulenka was a swirling hurricane of negative force energy. By forcing a large of amount of dark side energy into her target she could cause the person to be purged from existence in a violent display of lightning and black energy that resulted in the target being ripped apart and dissolved. In the Omniverse this is not possible as the laws of the verse are not the same. By creating a baseball sized orb of Omnilium surrounded by crackling black and red lightning, Trixie slams the orb into the chest of her target with an open palm. The Omnilium is absorbed into the enemy Prime or Secondary where it attempts to corrupt and purge the target of their life force. As the target rejects the foreign Omnilium, damage is inflicted and pain is induced via the infused lightning. After about four seconds the ball of Omnilium exits opposite from where it entered and explodes into a harmless display of light.

Let me know what you think of Essence Purge. I had a random idea. Essentially wherever Trixie slams the balls of Omnilium onto the target imagine a straight line through that persons body out to the other end. It takes four seconds for the ball to travel through whilst electrocuting and causing damage.
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