10-10-2015, 12:38 AM
Yeah, I actually have all those problems myself, love me them commas xD. <<evidence here. But yeah, I actually went over when commas are needed and how often comma splices and stuff come up so I was really attentive to them. Someone had also pointed out that ellipses being used as pauses was a grammatical error, so i spotted those too. I would have definitely lost going against either of you in this fight. :frogsiren:
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