Jacob, Son of Sora

[Reece]

I'm not a mod, so I don't have any official say in the matter, but in the interests of saving their time, I'll post this so that Minato or Proto won't have to:

Your move is going to need a description.

Luckily, you already have one. All you've done is put it in the wrong section. If you just move the keyblades' description from "weapons and clothing" (which isn't actually part of the joining form anyway) and put it under your move instead then you should be more-or-less good to go, like this:

Dual keyblades (600 OM)
Oathkeeper and Oblivion keyblades, about 4' from tip to the end of the hilt. The blades are about 6" in width except at the key protrusion which is about 1' across. The width of the hilt is 1' foot and its about 1' long. They have similar functionality to katanas with how they are used to fight but can also be used like hook swords with the key protrusion on both. The blades are summoned instead of drawn but it takes the same amount of time as if you were drawing a sword. (These dimensions and attributes apply for both blades)

And the bit you wrote about his clothing can just be included in Physical Description; there's no need for a separate heading to describe fashion choices.

Also, you might be allowed to keep it as it is (I'm not certain), but generally we don't mention the Gate of Truth; I know that Omni looks just like that guy, but he's not actually supposed to be him (at best, he's some sort of alternate universe doppelgänger version)... so you might want to remove the "hundreds of hands begin to grab and take Epoch in pieces" bit from your Character History.

Other than those minor details, it looks to me like you've done a good job reading the Rules and writing up your application. Good luck getting approved and I hope you enjoy your time here after getting through.