10-09-2015, 03:25 AM
I'd love for someone to give me some extensive critique. Just click on my character profile under my avi and select any one of my threads located on my roster. Everything I have ever written on the Omniverse is there for you to chose from, from oldest to latest and it's been a while since I had some really constructive critique, so, hit me with it!
Dante's Abyss 2015
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Mark Twain Wrote:"The difference between the right word and the almost right word is the difference between lightning and a lightning bug."

